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In reply to the discussion: Celebrate with me! [View all]CaliforniaPeggy
(149,611 posts)39. My dear MiddleFingerMom!
Not sure I follow what you're saying about lines 3 and 4...
I do make every effort to have every word speak clearly. I want my poetry to be distilled down to the minimum, while maximizing the impact.
I love your balloon story! That must have been quite a sight. Your description makes me see them...
Poet Lariat?
Oh, and I meant to mention that I was not in a down mood at all, when I saw the sight I wrote about. I was on my way home from the workshop when I saw this, and I was feeling quite happy with how things were going. And I'm still happy!
Thank you for your critique! I really appreciate it.
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Thank you so much, my dear abq e streeter! I appreciate your comments so much...
CaliforniaPeggy
Dec 2011
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