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nadinbrzezinski

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56. There are three versions
Sun May 31, 2015, 03:33 PM
May 2015

Last edited Sun May 31, 2015, 05:31 PM - Edit history (1)

the kindle version, is the last one and the one I got. So it's gotten some fixes. It is not the grammar, I hate cookie cutter, cardboard characters and these ones were even thinner. I think paper thin. The "story arc" was really bland and the over use of certain phrases every two to three paragraphs drove me literally up a wall.

Edit, do not write when sleep is truly lacking

I have no problem with the essay and Bernie's honest comments. Avalux May 2015 #1
i thought he was 31, to her 16, 17? just stating facts. i have not made any comment at all seabeyond May 2015 #2
You're right, he was older, and obtaining his master's degree. Avalux May 2015 #4
Could be but he polished it up and submitted it for publication. nt ucrdem May 2015 #16
He's six years older than Hillary. merrily May 2015 #86
ya. ok. so. seabeyond May 2015 #87
"A young age?" WTF? Orrex May 2015 #5
Yeah if the news story was even true Cheese Sandwich May 2015 #20
Absolutely. jwirr May 2015 #53
If it's so poorly written how can it be obvious joeybee12 May 2015 #100
"The old essay was criticizing rape culture attitudes like those on parade in 50 Shades." beam me up scottie May 2015 #108
This message was self-deleted by its author Warren DeMontague May 2015 #136
Some newspaper guy reports, sanders people starts ops... No one gives a shit. Who are 'they' seabeyond May 2015 #140
This message was self-deleted by its author Warren DeMontague May 2015 #144
Looks like you've got some fans here. beam me up scottie May 2015 #143
This message was self-deleted by its author Warren DeMontague May 2015 #145
Well apparently your penis interferes with your reading comprehension. beam me up scottie May 2015 #150
This message was self-deleted by its author Warren DeMontague May 2015 #152
Good cuz that wouldn't help. beam me up scottie May 2015 #155
This message was self-deleted by its author Warren DeMontague May 2015 #156
Reminds me of when news came out about dimson's drunk driving arrest MoonRiver May 2015 #60
i call it cause of bush drugs in 40's. i hated that one. nt seabeyond May 2015 #70
Was he in his 40s? MoonRiver May 2015 #74
i know. time as in we age, or time gone by? cause i use to know every detail about everything. seabeyond May 2015 #77
I so know what you mean! MoonRiver May 2015 #78
lol. you made me laugh. now. outta of this thread. didnt like the first four OPs on this. nt seabeyond May 2015 #80
Gotta laugh! MoonRiver May 2015 #82
You're comparing satire to drunk driving? Scootaloo May 2015 #167
And the bizarre things that appeared in men's magazines at the time arcane1 May 2015 #17
A thirty year old man is not the same as a high school kid. pnwmom May 2015 #59
This message was self-deleted by its author Warren DeMontague May 2015 #92
no. it does not. please stop going thru this thread, insisting it is a feminist piece. seabeyond May 2015 #94
This message was self-deleted by its author Warren DeMontague May 2015 #128
Ya... Thru a man eye that was privileged and paternalistic. No mckinney seabeyond May 2015 #131
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I know you can't cause you are seeing the piece as a man not a feminist... As you compare it to fems seabeyond May 2015 #137
This message was self-deleted by its author Warren DeMontague May 2015 #142
Of course I did a week ago the first of now 6 ops on this. All brought to you by pro sanders seabeyond May 2015 #149
This message was self-deleted by its author Warren DeMontague May 2015 #154
So men can't be feminists? That's sexist. beam me up scottie May 2015 #146
Right, because men just aren't qualified to comment on such things. NaturalHigh Jun 2015 #183
No it doesn't. gollygee May 2015 #101
This message was self-deleted by its author Warren DeMontague May 2015 #129
He writes from the point of view of a man gollygee May 2015 #163
This message was self-deleted by its author Warren DeMontague May 2015 #164
Yes we are in agreement there. n/t gollygee May 2015 #165
+1! It should help him capture some of the feminist vote peecoolyour May 2015 #148
Hey, there you go. Put it on his website to draw women. Like I say, brilliant seabeyond May 2015 #151
It is, isn't it? beam me up scottie May 2015 #159
This message was self-deleted by its author Warren DeMontague May 2015 #161
50 Shades isn't a feminist piece. Sorry. NT BreakfastClub May 2015 #180
This message was self-deleted by its author Warren DeMontague Jun 2015 #182
30 is a kid? joeybee12 May 2015 #99
31 is not a kid!! uponit7771 May 2015 #178
Ummmm.... not sure that's helping, Bernie. Nye Bevan May 2015 #3
or hillary. OMG.... lol. nt seabeyond May 2015 #6
Or Bill. Or Barack. ucrdem May 2015 #9
could you imagine what would happen with obama? that would turn ugly, fast. nt seabeyond May 2015 #11
Very ugly, very fast. Yes. ucrdem May 2015 #12
yup. and the expected silence, because it is.... this is what pisses me off. different expectations seabeyond May 2015 #14
Well, given that Bernie's essay was a critique of rape culture, I'd be pleased if Luminous Animal May 2015 #26
bullshit. i did not like reading, how sanders was playing with this in his mind. regardless. seabeyond May 2015 #39
Ironic. merrily May 2015 #88
Especially the hypocrisy part. Enthusiast Jun 2015 #186
If you think you "have ignored this subject" beam me up scottie May 2015 #157
"was still in the language of man"... NaturalHigh Jun 2015 #184
Nope. Not helping. Orsino May 2015 #13
"Lie?" MoonRiver May 2015 #72
Naw, I think he's telling the truth about his intent... Orsino Jun 2015 #188
It was not a rape fantasy article. It was a critique of how women are portrayed in men's magazines. Luminous Animal May 2015 #24
Surely you don't expect people to actually READ the article, do you? arcane1 May 2015 #27
Is it posted somewhere? treestar May 2015 #66
There's a link in the OP arcane1 May 2015 #69
Theres a photo of the old newspaper article treestar May 2015 #120
OK, I edited the post (nt) Nye Bevan May 2015 #28
MSNBC didn't even care before they ran this headline Cheese Sandwich May 2015 #50
Anybody not a Repuke is going to go through this treestar May 2015 #68
Does that go for Bill Clinton in 1992 and Hillary in 2016, too, or only for Bernie? merrily May 2015 #91
Haven't the Clinton's lives been treestar May 2015 #107
First, my question was about Bill in 1992, when Genifer Flowers hit the fan. merrily May 2015 #113
The point was it all came out treestar May 2015 #116
OMG, Bernie did not say the media was unfair to bring this up. It's the Clintons who do that stuff. merrily May 2015 #118
People on this thread did treestar May 2015 #122
You're saying BERNIE should have expected it to come up because of what DUers post?* merrily May 2015 #123
The Bernie followers need to get the fact that treestar May 2015 #172
That goes 100 times over for the Hillary supporters. And again, what merrily May 2015 #173
lol Hillary of course knows treestar May 2015 #174
not a lot of men did that back then--I respect him even more now zazen May 2015 #55
I wish I could rec your post. beam me up scottie May 2015 #121
This is the answer his campaign team came up with? BeyondGeography May 2015 #7
Did you read the essay? Because it was clearly a critique of how women were depicted in men's Luminous Animal May 2015 #30
Tell it to Team Bernie BeyondGeography May 2015 #45
Meh azmom May 2015 #8
I guess this questions Bernie is right for women. Shot a hole in his raft when out at sea. Thinkingabout May 2015 #10
If you ask me, people making a big deal out of this 40+ year old article are making... MohRokTah May 2015 #15
Bullshit. The essay was criticizing rape culture attitudes like those on parade in 50 Shades Cheese Sandwich May 2015 #18
Ditto... MrMickeysMom May 2015 #21
Segami wrote a good piece on this. AtomicKitten May 2015 #22
It could not be nadinbrzezinski May 2015 #19
The English isn't the problem. nt ucrdem May 2015 #23
I have read the full essay nadinbrzezinski May 2015 #25
I flipped through it and didn't notice any grammar lapses ucrdem May 2015 #31
As I said, those comversations do not belong here nadinbrzezinski May 2015 #32
A couple of years ago that particular conversation ucrdem May 2015 #36
Which is why I attempted, valiantly, to actually read 50 shades nadinbrzezinski May 2015 #38
Well, critique is not the word that came to mind when I was looking through it ucrdem May 2015 #46
Well I prefer to know what I am talking about nadinbrzezinski May 2015 #51
I just checked the online PDF version and the grammar at least is fine. ucrdem May 2015 #54
There are three versions nadinbrzezinski May 2015 #56
Yes, that's par for the course. ucrdem May 2015 #58
It stands out because it got academic interest due to the them nadinbrzezinski May 2015 #61
Could be. Doesn't do much for Sanders' argument. ucrdem May 2015 #63
I am not talking about Sanders nadinbrzezinski May 2015 #81
comparing it to Twilight would be humorous dlwickham May 2015 #153
A stupid explanation to a stupid question mythology May 2015 #29
If you had read the article, you would know that it was a critique of rape culture. Luminous Animal May 2015 #33
The problem with Bernie's article is that most people can't get beyond the first few lines.. DCBob May 2015 #34
LOL...so much for women voters... Sancho May 2015 #35
Over in a couple of days, just like post #1 who hasn't gotten over Hillary in the Goldwater days. Thinkingabout May 2015 #40
LOL! merrily May 2015 #42
Bernie is wrong... Kalidurga May 2015 #37
I refuse to criticize another Democrat. DemocratSinceBirth May 2015 #41
Post removed Post removed May 2015 #43
Impeccable record on women's issues. Women ain't fools. nt merrily May 2015 #44
so lets start a fuckin OP in sanders name about mens fantasy to rape women. cause, he is after all seabeyond May 2015 #48
Are you SURE you're a Sanders supporter? NaturalHigh Jun 2015 #185
No we're not. beam me up scottie May 2015 #114
If you think about it, this is Hillary's big chance!!!! Sancho May 2015 #47
there you go, get in the gutter to null and void an already dead subject for sanders. seabeyond May 2015 #49
I assume you get the idea... Sancho May 2015 #57
Not the best possible response, I think. MineralMan May 2015 #52
Bernie Sanders: Sex article ROYDOG999 May 2015 #62
Easy response to anyone who asks: you obviously didn't read it - that's all he has to say. If they Exilednight May 2015 #96
To dredge up an article this old from Bernie's "hippie" days means one thing: Vinca May 2015 #64
No, it's sensational sex. MoonRiver May 2015 #65
This happens to all candidates gollygee May 2015 #67
He is a threat. And he remains a threat. They will keep looking. Enthusiast Jun 2015 #187
We should elect a corporatist who will rob us blind LittleBlue May 2015 #71
nobody on du is falling this, nobody is not voting sander because of, nobody said sanders is racist seabeyond May 2015 #73
You know how you can tell it's a game for the gullible? LittleBlue May 2015 #75
dont know dont care about title or what you posted after this. i am playing in his crowds.... seabeyond May 2015 #79
But us wimmenfolks need to be told what to think. beam me up scottie May 2015 #112
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For God's sake, no one called him a racist gollygee May 2015 #76
Yes, it's fairly tame in its context. That is true. ucrdem May 2015 #83
oh oh. let it be pot. i so want to post this picture. seabeyond May 2015 #85
He already admitted he smoked pot. Hell, even Ted fucking Cruz smoked pot at some point. Warren DeMontague May 2015 #138
Good thing I used my picture now then... seabeyond May 2015 #141
Sometimes when bad and untrue stories continue to emerge and are Thinkingabout May 2015 #84
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Post removed Post removed May 2015 #93
MJ says his marriage broke up in the late 60s and the article seems to reflect that. ucrdem May 2015 #95
Best answer so far. Koinos May 2015 #98
Thanks . . . ucrdem May 2015 #102
This message was self-deleted by its author Warren DeMontague May 2015 #130
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This sander is great for women. polly7 May 2015 #147
How is that gonna play in the bible belt Warren DeMontague May 2015 #158
LOL. Yep. nt. polly7 May 2015 #162
A non-religious belt sander that doesn't pander to christians. beam me up scottie May 2015 #168
Santa's pandering sander pandas for Sanders Warren DeMontague May 2015 #170
Just let your man parts read it. beam me up scottie May 2015 #171
Sure they have, but it doesn't say what they want it to so they're making shit up. beam me up scottie May 2015 #103
Then why did he feel a need to denounce it? BainsBane May 2015 #166
This message was self-deleted by its author Warren DeMontague May 2015 #169
Don't care to discuss the article BainsBane May 2015 #175
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The revolution is not about Bernie. It's about us. azmom May 2015 #90
Thank you! BainsBane May 2015 #176
So are you trying to help catapult the notion that this is this Bernie's "Pen-Gazi"? corkhead May 2015 #97
Pen Ghazi. I see what you did there. merrily May 2015 #124
It was not a rape fantasy article, for those who want to see where this lie is coming from: beam me up scottie May 2015 #104
It's an allegory and it's not really clear what it's about. (Full text) ucrdem May 2015 #105
Says the person who defended the article associating Sanders with slavery and racist cops. beam me up scottie May 2015 #106
Better the text than the rumor and I've already stated that it's well-intentioned. ucrdem May 2015 #111
The patriarchy was an established concept gollygee May 2015 #109
Well said. beam me up scottie May 2015 #115
Wasn't that 1971, anyway? Twenty years before he first went to Congress where he earned a 100% merrily May 2015 #125
Those ratings gollygee May 2015 #126
No complaints that I know of from a single woman who worked with or for him either, even merrily May 2015 #127
About Bernie: Welcome to the world of national politics AZ Progressive May 2015 #179
Meh. Who cares? LadyHawkAZ May 2015 #110
It's a little weird, isn't it? Warren DeMontague May 2015 #132
I read a bit of it LadyHawkAZ May 2015 #135
I assume then that everyone here who complained about... brooklynite May 2015 #119
Bernie Sanders was a feminist before it was trendy? peecoolyour May 2015 #139
I did read the chunk on display on Vox... backscatter712 May 2015 #160
The essay is bad, but his non-apologies are worse. KitSileya Jun 2015 #181
Much ado about nothing! B Calm Jun 2015 #189
Isn't that the way of Upchuck Toad? n/t RoccoR5955 Jun 2015 #190
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