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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Oct-15-08 07:26 PM
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My oldest poem!
(Lame Copycat) :loveya: calpeg

Ugh my name Grog.
Fell down walking on log.
Hit balls on rock.
Me went into shock.
Lay down like baby.
Purple, balls they be.
Grog got hurt when Grog fall.
Wish Grog had Tylenol.
Me talk like girl now.
All Grog say now is Ow!

Grog 9000 B.C.
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Pool Hall Ace Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Oct-15-08 07:34 PM
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1. lovely effort!
:applause:
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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Oct-15-08 07:37 PM
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2. He was quite talented.
You could almost feel his pain.:crazy: :dunce: Thank you :) :hi:
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Dangerously Amused Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Oct-15-08 10:12 PM
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3. Hard to top THAT, dude!


:applause:


Your poems RAWK!!!
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lizziegrace Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Oct-15-08 10:39 PM
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5. Woohoo!
:applause:


:)
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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Oct-16-08 03:15 AM
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7. It helps being a raging lunatic
:silly: Thanks D_A :loveya:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Oct-15-08 10:29 PM
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4. Dude!
That's worth a photo!

Check your PM in a few...

RL
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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Oct-16-08 03:16 AM
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8. woo hoo!
How did you get that picture of CalPeg? :hide:
(and yowza) :D
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Oct-16-08 12:18 AM
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6. My dear GoPsUx!
Ah, you made me laugh!

I just love this!

Thank you, babe...:loveya:
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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Oct-16-08 03:17 AM
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9. I'm good for something
Ok..Maybe not. :P
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