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Squatch (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Dec-21-05 02:39 PM Original message |
Let's create our own Hemingway short story... |
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Squatch (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Dec-21-05 02:40 PM Response to Original message |
1. Jack removed the cigarette from the worn leather case. |
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CarpeDiebold (652 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Dec-21-05 02:42 PM Response to Reply #1 |
2. The rain fell around him in slow sheets. |
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Beer Snob-50 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Dec-21-05 02:43 PM Response to Reply #2 |
3. He sat under a tree and smoked a pack of cigerettes. |
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Rising Phoenix (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Dec-21-05 02:43 PM Response to Reply #3 |
4. He took a big swallow of his drink, wiping his mouth with his hand. |
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trackfan (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Dec-21-05 02:44 PM Response to Reply #4 |
5. It tasted good. |
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Squatch (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Dec-21-05 02:45 PM Response to Reply #4 |
6. He noticed the old bullet wound. |
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Rising Phoenix (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Dec-21-05 02:46 PM Response to Reply #6 |
7. And recalled. |
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Squatch (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Dec-21-05 02:46 PM Response to Reply #7 |
9. ...the trek across the desert. |
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Crazy Guggenheim (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Dec-21-05 02:48 PM Response to Reply #9 |
12. He was so tired he couldn't hardly lift his hand. |
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democracyindanger (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Dec-21-05 02:48 PM Response to Reply #9 |
13. On the horizon, Jack could see the magical unicorns from Rainbowland. |
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Squatch (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Dec-21-05 02:49 PM Response to Reply #13 |
14. He drew his pistol, taking aim. |
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Rising Phoenix (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Dec-21-05 02:52 PM Response to Reply #14 |
16. and missed, still having the shakes from not finishing his morning drink |
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Squatch (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Dec-21-05 02:52 PM Response to Reply #16 |
18. "Damn unicorns" he swore, under his stale breath. |
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LostinVA (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Dec-21-05 02:53 PM Response to Reply #16 |
19. He holstered his pistol and took a flask from his pocket |
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Squatch (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Dec-21-05 02:53 PM Response to Reply #19 |
20. It was empty. |
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trackfan (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Dec-21-05 04:53 PM Response to Reply #20 |
21. "What's the problem?" asked Rose, in her familiar, husky drawl. |
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DS1 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Dec-21-05 02:46 PM Response to Reply #6 |
10. "No such thing as a Hemingway short story." He muttered. |
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Squatch (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Dec-21-05 02:51 PM Response to Reply #10 |
15. "But there sure as hell should be" he finished. |
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Call Me Wesley (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Dec-21-05 02:46 PM Response to Original message |
8. She died. |
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Squatch (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Dec-21-05 02:47 PM Response to Reply #8 |
11. Jack pondered the opening scene of "The Stranger." |
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ForrestGump (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Dec-21-05 02:52 PM Response to Reply #11 |
17. He fell asleep. The sound sleep of a man who has taken Xanax. A manly |
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