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vademocrat Donating Member (962 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Mar-12-06 09:55 AM
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29. Here's a few more things I found -
Teas -> Harney's teas: varieties is misspelled

Teas -> Numi's teas -> flowering teas: "call us for detail" - add "s" to detail. Add period for consistency.

Teas -> Numi's teas -> Numi's boxed teabags: the close paragraph ) after 6 dropped a line

Teas -> Numi's teas -> Bamboo box sets -> Mini box set: add period after "light birch finish" for consistency.

Teas -> Numi's teas -> Bamboo box sets -> Velvet tea chest: "...glass window in the clear-topped chest;..." - I'd rewrite the sentence for clarity: "...or, if you prefer a more traditional look, the wooden-topped velvet chest."

Also, where is the choice made between the clear-topped chest or the wooden-topped velvet chest? I didn't see an option when I placed it in the cart & I didn't see a wooden-topped velvet chest for sale elsewhere on the site. There is a wooden-topped chest but it doesn't specify "velvet".

Accessories -> coffee accessories: "Inventory changes often so check back often." I'd change one of the "oftens". Maybe "Inventory changes on a regular basis, so check back often."

Accessories -> tea accessories -> chinese red clay teapot: infuser is misspelled. (BTW, this is a BEAUTIFUL teapot!)

Feel free to pm me if you have any questions or want me to look at anything else - I love doing this kind of stuff!

I know where I'm shopping for my sisters-in-law next holiday season - you have a wonderful tea/accessories selection!

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