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7th_Sephiroth Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-07-04 02:49 PM
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4. ok let me put this into some context
Edited on Wed Apr-07-04 02:57 PM by 7th_Sephiroth
the story is set some thousand years in the future, where nano-machine implantation is nearing becoming way of life. The main charater "Legato Swiftblade" hates technoligy. One day he is kidnapped by the company that pretty mych runs everything, and is used for tests to create a new super soldier. Here comes into play the race of catlike people, they see what the evil company is trying to do (universal domination, through mind controll nanomachines) and have been secretly working on a nanomachine system to create thier own supersoldier, Legato. As stated before Legato hates technoligy like nano machines, and it kind of splits his mind in half, hateing himself because of whats inside him, but finding the energy to fight.
The samurai armor is a power-suit itself and basically enhances his allready enhanced abilities. And the robots were just a training/work-out program, they were holograms, i think i worked why why out pretty nicely on that.

thats it in a nutshell, i want to make it into a TV series or a book

i chose this part cause it does a decent part stand alone, it reflects my writeing style, and i'd like some feed back.

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