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Reply #13: It was poorly written and tried too hard
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Fri May-07-10 06:20 PM
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13. It was poorly written and tried too hard |
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When the writer feels the need to contrive a scene simply to have a character state what should be obvious from the actions and dialog, yeah, the writing isn't too great. It telegraphed a lot of its punches and was too contrived.
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