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Dystopian Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Apr-02-10 09:10 PM
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3. Awesome
I recently wrote a poem...I put in the two words(fear/hatred)...and the title.
This is eerie....there was nothing about a sea...but in the poem...freaky.


Glass Crash

Slowly a hatred continues upon the pulpy sea.
Stalking nothing like it was raped--Just like a pop tart
Hearken to thy thumb as salaciousness overcomes thee
The fear danced like a dainty pixy, or a fragile little elf
Her lover held on to her gummy cilium, she was intense
Sexyness washed over she like a fleeting chicory,
Diving in a lake of drear, the fear found a golden killer rabbit
Taste my fist or my other parts, feel the pleasure as I knife you
Frolicking for foul fun, fear, bite a woman's purse instead.

Wow...thank you.
And another...with the same words...so very odd.

Moving radiantly the smiley solitary hatred appeared in the bushes,
Like Semper Fi in the eye or Martin Luther King screeching to his little toe
Everlasting horrors realizing through the sky,
Crooked smiles were repelled as the heads rolled along the green tiled floor
The lousy bard sings a ballad, sing the song of the fear.. . In it make her die
Last for the reviving first for the sinking--Now you must neglect
The hatred trembled, her Martin Luther shook,
Her lip radiated like Virgo in the sky
Spare me your passionate bauble or I shall fry.

I'd better stop now...:-)

peace~
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