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Sun Dec-19-04 10:42 PM
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| 1. Oh I like your poem. :-) |
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This is the first poem I ever wrote,
Hero’s
Why do you hate
Why do we hurt
Why do you kill
Is this your will
There are no good knights
Tell me is this right
How can we keep this pace
When did this all become a race
You all want to get paid
But all that fades
Into zero
Now can you tell me where are
The hero’s?
Its really not very good, but for a first try I don't think its bad. :)
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