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Showing Original Post only (View all)I woke up at 3:30, wrote this down, and 10 minutes later went back to sleep. [View all]
Breaking Camp
This was a good place to camp
the folding hills and the shade
beneath the trees by the water.
The land was inviting and nurturing
but it's time to break camp
and continue the journey.
The great fires we danced around
with such fervor late into the night
are beginning to fade.
The fires danced too, their wavering flames
played tricks with the dancer's shadows
and sent sparks high into the darkness.
Did they die out or just disappear?
Tomorrow we leave and scatter the ashes.
It's time to break camp
but I will miss this place.
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I woke up at 3:30, wrote this down, and 10 minutes later went back to sleep. [View all]
panader0
Jan 2020
OP
Is this a Marge Piercy poem? I know there's a collection of her poems by this title. Just checking.
ancianita
Jan 2020
#13
I've never heard of her, (and me an ex-lit major and dropout) but will look her up.
panader0
Jan 2020
#17