*The Kiss* My poem for the open mic tonight...
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*The Kiss* My poem for the open mic tonight...
You take my kiss and you make it Yours My lips part And my tongue is Just a moment away I open my body I give your seed Life The kiss is where we start Here: My kiss.
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Tue Feb-24-09 07:00 PM
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1. I love the way it just trails off...
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Tue Feb-24-09 07:04 PM
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And I just edited it to end that way... Thanks, sweetie! :hi:
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Tue Feb-24-09 07:00 PM
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Tue Feb-24-09 07:36 PM
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That poem and you can be described in one word: Choice. You're a wonder :hug: :loveya: :applause:
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Tue Feb-24-09 07:38 PM
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5. My dear SalmonChantedEvening...
Oh, sweetie... You amaze me, always! Thank you...:loveya: :hug: :pals:
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Tue Feb-24-09 09:40 PM
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Tue Feb-24-09 09:44 PM
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8. You're the one posting about your little cheerleader outfit
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Wed Feb-25-09 01:41 AM
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Sorry to have offended you... :-(
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Tue Feb-24-09 09:43 PM
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7. Back to the shower I go.
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Wed Feb-25-09 01:42 AM
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Look at it this way! You're staying clean... ;) Thanks, sweetie...:hug:
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Tue Feb-24-09 10:30 PM
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9. Thank you. That is great.
:) :loveya: :*
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Wed Feb-25-09 01:43 AM
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So glad you like it! Thank you, sweetie... :hug:
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Tue Mar-03-09 02:25 AM
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13. This is just a remarkably moving poem..
Thanks ever so much, CaliforniaPeggy :pals:
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Tue Mar-03-09 02:43 AM
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Oh, sweetie... You are too kind! Thank you... :hug:
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Tue Mar-03-09 02:39 AM
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14. My darlin' Miss Peggy! All I can say is:
WOW! Fabulous poem, my friend. Fabulous! :loveya: :hug: :loveya:
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Tue Mar-03-09 02:44 AM
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Thanks, sweetie! We know how good a kiss can be...don't we? :loveya: :hug: :loveya:
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Tue Mar-03-09 02:46 AM
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it's been awhile, but good thing my memory is still intact. ;-)
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Tue Mar-03-09 02:43 AM
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16. That's what I call "poetry"
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Tue Mar-03-09 02:45 AM
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Oh, I am so honored to have you appear here, in my thread... Thank you, sweetie... :hug:
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