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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Nov-18-08 07:55 AM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 11/18/08
"In Praise of Dreams"

In my dreams
I paint like Vermeer van Delft.

I speak fluent Greek
and not just with the living.

I drive a car
that does what I want it to.

I am gifted
and write mighty epics.

I hear voices
as clearly as any venerable saint.

My brilliance as a pianist
would stun you.

I fly the way we ought to,
i.e., on my own.

Falling from the roof,
I tumble gently to the grass.

I've got no problem
breathing under water.

I've can't complain:
I've been able to locate Atlantis.

It's gratifying that I can always
wake up before dying.

As soon as war breaks out,
I roll over on my other side.

I'm a child of my age,
but I don't have to be.

A few years ago
I saw two suns.

And the night before last a penguin,
clear as day.

—Wislawa Szymborska
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Nov-18-08 07:59 AM
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1. Nice!
:hi:

RL
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Nov-18-08 08:04 AM
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2. I had a good dream the other night. Entertaining, and possibly profitable.
Edited on Tue Nov-18-08 08:05 AM by BlueIris
I think it would make a fun screenplay.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Nov-18-08 11:03 AM
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3. Kick.
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BarenakedLady Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Nov-18-08 11:07 AM
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4. inchworm would like this one.
:D

:thumbsup:
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Inchworm Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Nov-18-08 11:16 AM
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6. You are correct
:D

Last night I was using clam shells as money.

:crazy:

Hi you!

:hi:
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Nov-18-08 11:10 AM
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5. Love It
thanks :D :donut: :hi:
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RandomThoughts Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Nov-18-08 11:18 AM
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7. Thats a really optimistic positive poem.
Thats a great one.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Nov-18-08 11:23 AM
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8. Well, we all need to do something different every once in a while. nt
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Nov-18-08 02:19 PM
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9. Ah, just look at all these responses. I love comments. nt
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Nov-18-08 02:36 PM
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10. My dear BlueIris!
What a great fantasy!

I love it...

Thanks!

:hi:
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