French speaking DUers: I need some help!

[Lorien]

Hi all,

I'm designing a fictional lobby poster for Disney. I wanted the text to say "JESSICA RABBIT - "KISSES FROM AMERICA" Live Paris debut at the Cabaret Blue. Two weeks only: September 14-28th" so I wrote JESSICA RABBIT BAISERS DE L'AMERIQUE Debut de Paris-Vivant au Cabaret Bleu . Deux semaines seulement Le 14 Septembre-28 eme" but Disney and Amblin say that the sentence structure isn't correct-however, they didn't offer the corrected version,I have to find that out for myself!

LynzM gave it a shot in the lounge. Here's what she came up with:

JESSICA RABBIT - "KISSES FROM AMERICA"
Live Paris debut at the Cabaret Blue
Two weeks only: September 14-28th

JESSICA RABBIT - GROS BISOUS DE L'AMERIQUE
Debut de Paris - en direct au Cabaret Bleu
Seulement deux semaines: Le 14-28ième Septembre


Your thoughts?

Thanks in advance!