Reply #240: No need to read the book due to the issue of Hair, Eyes, and Hands

[Az]

Resolve the problem of these three issues and then we may have some reason to move on to the composition of the cloth.

To reitirate:

The hair is unnaturally positioned along the side of the head as if the figure were standing. If he was laying down the hair would be pulled towards the back of the head rather then down towards the shoulders. I have long hair myself and can provide photo demonstration if you wish.

The eyes are too high on his head. This is an artifact of our own internal sense of positioning of eyes. We imagine them to be near the top of our head. In fact they are placed at the center of the head. Check it yourself.

His arms are too long. Lay down and try to cover your genetalia as the image is doing. You will find you cannot do it. Not without hunching your shoulders at the very least. And the shoulders are clearly not hunched in the image. This is merely an artistic attempt at modesty by covering the genetalia by distortion. Simply put in reality it is physically impossible.