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Edited on Sun Aug-31-03 04:41 PM by 0rganism
You use a clock with the minutes from 9:00 to 9:30 highlighted (12 to 6), during the split screen portion. However, the hour hand is seen a little before the 9, not moving, and should probably be given similar highlighting treatment for clarity (9 to 9.5, perhaps at the radius of extension of the hour hand). When I first saw your film, I was somewhat unclear as to the time, because of my subconscious reaction to the clock hands. They just didn't look right.
It's a shame when a niggling detail like that can distract from the absolute horror of the situation, but unfortunately it did, for me anyway.
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