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Response to Fire Walk With Me (Original post)

Fri Jun 22, 2012, 08:59 AM

5. 8/10 - Good use of misspelled words, sloppy punctuation, and personal attacks

 

A well-written rant. I would have used more bona fide swear words and a bit more SHOUTING.

Referring to police officers as "pigs" is certainly classical, but IMO would be stronger if emphasized by intensifiers, e.g. "Fascist pigs and their media lap-dogs."

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