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slackmaster

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5. 8/10 - Good use of misspelled words, sloppy punctuation, and personal attacks

Reply to Fire Walk With Me (Original post)

Fri Jun 22, 2012, 08:59 AM

Jun 2012

A well-written rant. I would have used more bona fide swear words and a bit more SHOUTING.

Referring to police officers as "pigs" is certainly classical, but IMO would be stronger if emphasized by intensifiers, e.g. "Fascist pigs and their media lap-dogs."

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Gonna be a long, hot summer. PuraVidaDreamin Jun 2012 #1

OWS tactical suggestion 90-percent Jun 2012 #2

that's a good experiment! Rosa Luxemburg Jun 2012 #13

Great suggestion! One point of detail, to complete the Teabagger Illusion... GReedDiamond Jun 2012 #25

The rightwingers sulphurdunn Jun 2012 #3

These cops/teabaggers in solidarity. That's why. SammyWinstonJack Jun 2012 #6

Of course, but sulphurdunn Jun 2012 #9

Exactly. Most cops ARE teabaggers. n/t backscatter712 Jun 2012 #11

Really? zappaman Jun 2012 #15

+ a gazillion chervilant Jun 2012 #4

8/10 - Good use of misspelled words, sloppy punctuation, and personal attacks slackmaster Jun 2012 #5

One of those arrested is a young lady facing $50,000.00 bail. Fire Walk With Me Jun 2012 #17

What did she do Meiko Jun 2012 #20

I'm sure for nothing, as is usual. Fire Walk With Me Jun 2012 #22

So you begin a new thread on the same topic clang1 Jun 2012 #7

One of those arrested is a young lady facing $50,000.00 bail. Fire Walk With Me Jun 2012 #18

It might be more true now than at any time since our nations founding. raouldukelives Jun 2012 #8

Someone needs to be reading more porn threads. randome Jun 2012 #10

How about an Occupy porn video? Zorra Jun 2012 #14

First, they take the chalk away..... deaniac21 Jun 2012 #12

Actually, there was recently a Federal ruling that chalking isn't harmful. Fire Walk With Me Jun 2012 #16

Well, it's probably not that harmful deaniac21 Jun 2012 #19

Revolution isn't easy. Phhhtttt Jun 2012 #21

Thank you for marching, may you always have a peaceful result! Fire Walk With Me Jun 2012 #23

K & R! lonestarnot Jun 2012 #24