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They're not good. They never really have been good. And it's extremely disheartening to see that after all this time she hasn't improved in the slightest.
I'm not trying to piss people off, I'm trying to have respect for the truth here. I agree with everything she said. I support everything she said. I'm not talking about WHAT she said. I'm talking about HOW she said it.
It was robotic. It was mostly monotone. She was reading off of a piece of paper like it was the first time she read it. In short: It sucked.
And if you think it doesn't matter, you're delusional. In politics, delivery matters more than the content. This is why people voted for George W. Bush over Al Gore. Is George W. Bush a great speaker? Of course not. But he was "down homey" and "relateable" and all that other BULLSHIT that matters to the general voting population. He was the guy "you'd have a beer with" while Al Gore was stiff, robotic, uninspiring.
Hillary Clinton comes off as phoney and untrustworthy when she speaks to a large crowd. I AM NOT SAYING THAT SHE IS PHONEY OR UNTRUSTWORTHY. I'm saying that's how she COMES OFF, and it fucking matters. WE are not the same as the average voter out there. We are the base. We're going to support our candidate because we're paying attention to issues and care about what they are saying, not how they are saying it.
THEY, the American people, all they care about is delivery. They vote for who they like. They vote for the one who "feels" trustworthy and true. And that comes from the way a candidate delivers a speech. Hillary Clinton needs to work on this NOW. I'm sure she can get there. It's sad that she hasn't gotten there after all this time.
This is constructive criticism. This is honesty. You can choose to live in a bubble and say Hillary Clinton is great no matter what, or you can be real. If you're being real, you can't honestly say she did a good job today.
EDIT
I'm going to make a prediction. Could be wrong. But my prediction is this: Her numbers are going to take a hit after this speech. Let's see if they do a poll within a timely fashion and see what happens. Like I said, I could be wrong, but I'm going with it.
onehandle
(51,122 posts)And goodbye.
philosslayer
(3,076 posts)Some people are just not natural speakers. Secretary Clinton continues to improve. We're voting for a leader. A Commander in Chief. A President. Not a head orator.
Bobbie Jo
(14,341 posts)tl/dr
MoonRiver
(36,926 posts)But thank you for your concern.
PowerToThePeople
(9,610 posts)I do not agree with this video making fun of the differently-abled, but I think you get the point.
bigtree
(86,015 posts)...but Bush was only "down homey" to his bigoted supporters. He always struck me as an ignorant jerk; a creep. His speaking style was one of an uneducated moron; a cruel high school prankster.
I never bought into the hype spread that night of the debate about Gore.
FSogol
(45,580 posts)was going to get away with it, thanks to Daddy and his powerful friends.
cwydro
(51,308 posts)Nail on head.
nolabear
(42,001 posts)This is something entirely other than constructive criticism (what, you've got anybody who counts' ear?) or honesty. It's an opinion. And one many, many of us don't share.
Btw, are you not an American? I noted the "they."
Starry Messenger
(32,342 posts)People were lunging at her to get hugs. Sorry you are sad.
MADem
(135,425 posts)You didn't need to write a half dozen paragraphs to tell us that you aren't on her team.
But I'll bet she gives a better speech than you ever could.
Oh....and that's "constructive criticism" ... that's "honesty." You can choose to live in a bubble, or you can choose to be real. If you're being real, you can't honestly say that this post of yours accomplished much of anything today.
Sound familiar...?
YOU could give a better speech because you have a natural way with words.. I've noticed that before.
So does the writer of the OP....it flows nicely with paragraph breaks the same as if he were speaking and changing the tone of his voice for the next thought. Your post is like that.
Some speeches are long and don't seem to be paragraphed the right way, or at all. I have a hard time reading them because I am too dumb to change subjects without somebody telling me when.
hrmjustin
(71,265 posts)MADem
(135,425 posts)NCTraveler
(30,481 posts)Seems clear she knocked it out of the park. I'm also not saying you are "PHONEY OR UNTRUSTWORTHY. I'm saying that's how" you "COMES OFF, and it fucking matters."
femmocrat
(28,394 posts)And this is the second thread I have read of yours today critiquing her delivery. Who are you, Cicero?
She has a bit of a midwestern accent which makes her tone kind of flat, but I thought her delivery has improved over 2008.
askew
(1,464 posts)The only time she gets passionate is when talking about women's issues and herself. But, she isn't going to need to be anything but mediocre to win the primary. There is just too much institutional and media support for Hillary not to win. I'd like to see O'Malley or Sanders win but it just won't happen unfortunately. I think Hillary's inability to inspire people outside her core base is going to kill us in the general election though.
6chars
(3,967 posts)I don't think it's much of a concern. Pretty much every politician now sounds like they're doing speeches all the time and no matter who is speaking, there are enough cliches that they sound like a politician giving a speech... "we (will) have the best ___ in the world" (education, healthcare, military, entrepeneurs, workers, energy technology, etc.) I try to listen for what is different and what is specific enough that they will pay a price if they don't follow through, or for some explanation that they really understand the cause of a problem and so the steps to fix it make sense. That wasn't really the purpose of this speech, but I would like to see get wonky like that.
askew
(1,464 posts)That's why she has such low trustworthy #s. All politicians bullshit to an extent but the great ones can make you believe what they are saying (see Bill Clinton, Barack Obama). Hillary is horrible at this and she always looks pained to have to interact with people. Bill and Obama act like they love meeting the people.
6chars
(3,967 posts)if you know they're bs-ing, wouldn't you rather have the one whose at least uncomfortable with that?
Just to compare for oratory style, not governing style, George HW Poppy Bush sort of played on this - knowing he could not be a great communicator Reagan but convincing enough people that he was a humble servant of the nation.
pangaia
(24,324 posts)mylye2222
(2,992 posts)It was unnatural and artificial. She looked like she was just reading the teleprompteur,not really living her words
JaneyVee
(19,877 posts)Segami
(14,923 posts)They're teleprompters The glass squares, which are called "beam splitters," are coated in such a way that they act as mirrors for the person at the podium while appearing transparent to people in the audience. They're carefully angled so that they pick up the text of the speech off TV monitors lying face up on the floor and reflect it toward the speaker.
JaneyVee
(19,877 posts)Segami
(14,923 posts)on each side of her?
http://www.cnn.com/2015/06/13/politics/hillary-clinton-roosevelt-island-rally/
JaneyVee
(19,877 posts)I know all about teleprompters, I work in the tv/film biz and she was reading off script at podium. Perhaps they chose not to use them. Either way, was a good policy speech.
Segami
(14,923 posts)she follows the teleprompter with her paper speech in case the prompter goes down, she can still read from the paper speech without losing her position in the speech.....its that simple.....
JaneyVee
(19,877 posts)She wasn't reading off a teleprompter, it seems she opted for paper. Perhaps glare from the sun. Either way, I think we can both agree this is a ridiculous debate to have.
Segami
(14,923 posts)Teleprompter and paper speech......Every glance up to her sides allows her to continue reading her speech.
If Hillary was going to read her speech strictly from her papers, she would have never had a teleprompter set up on stage.
If you want to see what a stage set up looks like when someone wants to read their paper speech exclusively,......here it is...
Marr
(20,317 posts)lol.
madokie
(51,076 posts)the teleprompters are clearly in sight the whole time. She was reading them as well as the paper on the podium
Here is the Speech in its entirety, who you gonna believe the video or your lying eyes
fadedrose
(10,044 posts)ellisonz
(27,711 posts)cherokeeprogressive
(24,853 posts)THIS is not an example of how to do it.
fadedrose
(10,044 posts)You won me over as a friend. Maybe it's that we both like good speakers and will miss Obama, and that fact is starting to loom more and more.
etherealtruth
(22,165 posts)She's not the orator her husband is ... very few people are. She doesn't need to be. Ronald Reagan was a horrific president, yet he was a very good orator
i was very impressed by her her speech today.
clearly, you were not. You began posting this immediately ... to each his own.
diamondhead
(54 posts)Ronald Reagan was a horrific president, yet he was a very good orator
How do you think he convinced people to vote for him? He was arguably the second worst president in American history after George W. Bush. Yet people loved him, and people STILL DO love him? Why? Because he was a good orator. A fucking fantastic orator.
It's almost ALL that matters!
pangaia
(24,324 posts)He made me want to throw up.
It was not that he was a good speaker, it is that people are dumb.
etherealtruth
(22,165 posts)Obama is pretty good (in juxtaposition to his predecessor he appeared great, as he has a mastery of the English language and can speak from a place of intelligence)
Clinton did a very good job.
We get it .... you came to DU to dis her .... I am not sure anyone really cares...? She did a very good job.
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fadedrose
(10,044 posts)I was blessed today.
About the time Mrs. Clinton took the microphone, no kidding, I fell asleep. Sound asleep. I woke up to a caller on C-Span who didn't like her, then a few others. One lady did like her.
That's all I got out of it today. They wasted money if I was supposed to be influenced. Any comments I've made about her speechwriting ability or presentation are based on past performance, before as someone said, "she improved since 2008."
But I'm happy for supporters who liked it.
How did you turn her speech into a waste of money for not influencing you? Hilarious.
etherealtruth
(22,165 posts)I enjoy seeing them all do well.
Scott Walker is the Koch brother's chosen one ... I applaud any and all of the Dems. They have all done well .... more importantly they are all infinitely better than anyone on the republican side.
madokie
(51,076 posts)CherokeeDem
(3,709 posts)No one is going to claim Hillary is an orator on the level of Obama or her husband. O'Malley certainly isn't a great speaker either nor is Bernie. His passion seems to make up for his skills. Can we not get past these petty discussions? If the only thing you have to say about her speech is to criticize her delivery, then you don't have a lot to complain about.
Evergreen Emerald
(13,071 posts)If all we want is a talking head for President, then America is in a world of hurt. We could go to Fox News for that.
MoonRiver
(36,926 posts)diamondhead
(54 posts)A talking head IS all America wants, which is why America is ALREADY in a world of hurt. George W. Bush won two elections against two robotic, uninspiring candidates who couldn't deliver a good speech. Yes, it's superficial. Have you not noticed what the majority of people watch on TV?!
suffragette
(12,232 posts)You're stacking false premises like turtles - all the way down.
Exilednight
(9,359 posts)Accomplishing their agenda. The presidency is nothing but selling an idea to the American people.
30% will always love what the president has to say, 30% will always hate what the president has to say. It's the 40% in the middle that you have to sell the idea to.
Reagan and Bill Clinton could sell weed seeds to a farmer, convince him to grow them and then after the sprouted they'd convince the farmer it was Romaine lettuce. That's why they were effective, and they both knew how to take their case to the people.
Obama is a great orator when it comes to campaigning, but lousy when it comes to policy speeches. It is one of the major reasons he had a hard time selling the ACA.
People believe Obama when he campaigns, but if he has to try and explain policy issues he feels and sounds the same way as the OP says and feels about Hillary.
This very issue was heavily critiqued in 2008, and her delivery cost her the primary.
hrmjustin
(71,265 posts)JaneyVee
(19,877 posts)You're probably to used to Obama's magnificent speech style. Plus, she had no teleprompter.
LittleBlue
(10,362 posts)Like super forced to the point of being cringeworthy. Been saying it for years. It's the main reason Obama came from nowhere to beat her. It makes her a poor speaker when authenticity can't be conveyed
CharlotteVale
(2,717 posts)MissDeeds
(7,499 posts)There is something cringeworthy in her delivery. You would think that in all the time she's been in the public eye, she could hone her public speaking skills.
misterhighwasted
(9,148 posts)kimbutgar
(21,248 posts)You can't compare her to Obama, or Sanders she is Hillary.
Historic NY
(37,458 posts)Hillary did fine......get used to it.
Thinkingabout
(30,058 posts)LiberalArkie
(15,734 posts)In Arkansas she tries that also and people saw through it. She should just try to be the educated successful woman that she is. She can't pull off "I am just one of you common people" thing and she should not try. Obama never tried, "I am one of you" speeches, I think he knew he couldn't pull it off. She needs to just get up on the stage and say what she wants to do and how she will do it. If she did that, then she would have it nailed.
Man from Pickens
(1,713 posts)(except while fundraising on Wall Street)
if this is the performance when every card can be perfectly stacked in her favor, this is going to be a very long campaign for those unfortunates who support her
hrmjustin
(71,265 posts)DanTex
(20,709 posts)She's no Obama in the speech-giving category, but this was a good one.
MohRokTah
(15,429 posts)Haters gonna hate.
fadedrose
(10,044 posts)why don't you run? You're a democrat, aren't you?
MohRokTah
(15,429 posts)to one of your posts. It shows up at the top of the list in My Posts without any listing.
Just had to get that out there.
MrMickeysMom
(20,453 posts)I'll have to piss more people off and try it out!
TeeYiYi
(8,028 posts)...I NEVER get tired of that kitteh stretching his pinkies in your sig!
TYY
MrMickeysMom
(20,453 posts)That's US
. never getting tired of seeking da TWOOF whilst we piss (some) people off in search of!
TeeYiYi
(8,028 posts)...that was a little bit of fancy stretching you just did right there.
TYY
aint_no_life_nowhere
(21,925 posts)Great public speakers are rare. Daddy Bush couldn't deliver a speech. Dubya made primitive grunts that passed for a speech. I hate politics and all the festivities in front of crowds, balloons, kissing babies, eating corndogs, and repeating the same old lines . I don't want a rousing speech. I wouldn't care if she were a deaf mute. All that matters to me is getting someone elected who will be somewhat liberal and send the evil conservatives back to the shadows where they belong. If Hillary stands the best chance of defeating the Reshit candidate, winning back the Congress, and, most importantly, appointing Supreme Court justices who will bring us back to the 21st century, then I'm all for her.
Yeah, I don't think speechifying is one of Hillary's strong suits but it doesn't matter to me. I don't want to be emotionally swept away by a candidate.
Sheepshank
(12,504 posts)The enthusiasm, cadence and empassioned words took a serious uptick.
Lilith Rising
(184 posts)Everybody (okay, almost everybody) starts off slow - what matters is if you pick up steam or not.
Lisa D
(1,532 posts)And I can't wait to vote for her
Quixote1818
(29,013 posts)I think she did average to above average. Certainly won't hurt her from what I could see and there were some nice moments where she really got the crowd going.
JonLP24
(29,322 posts)but robotic deliveries hits the nail of what I think of when I see Hillary Clinton. Bill Clinton was so excellent at public speaking that he probably could have won several consecutive terms and any time I ever felt strongly upset with Obama, hearing him at a public speaking event such as a press conference or anything really he was very calm & reassuring where I almost forgot his actions on policies but became more uninspiring over the two terms.
Gore I didn't see the first two things but uninspiring definitely. He seemed generally calm & relaxed during debates -- almost too relaxed where he was a little too honest which was a plus in my book but way too fair to Bush up-and-to including defending his heart and defending he didn't say what Bush expressed outrage over "he's implying that I have a dark heart" over something related to cuts to the Child Health Insurance program. Bush was a master of turning a debate question into a bumper slogan with the body movements and everything while Gore was more honest with how he handled questions & arguments. Bush would turn something like minority rights or hate crimes legislation and use that moment to bring up his "no child left behind" proposal. Gore requested from the moderator an opportunity to address the topic of education when the moderator shifted topics after the Bush answer (he should have changed the subject to address him on education) later which was never granted but he definitely needed to challenge him more. That was my only problem but the "like to have a beer" is exactly why he was chosen by the Roves & the Cheneys because they could never get elected to push through their greedy ideas.
Hillary Clinton does come across as phony ESPECIALLY when addressing issues is very little informed about but taking a strong stance (showing how ill-informed she is to people who are more informed on whatever the topic might be) but there are many other issues where she understands them very well and shows her smarts when she has great ideas that improve life. She has great ideas on how to improve corporate greed but the "sure thing" folks don't seem to understand she has a history of "gaffes", putting her foot in her mouth, so there is an opportunity that could present itself where she says something foolish therefore losing the narrative and the election. I never underestimate Republican marketing so you really have to be on top of things with your statements. Then there is a history of scandals real or imagined that will probably haunt her (the only ones I give an ounce of credibility are conflict of interests one and the war monger shit) in addition to her 47% unfavorable rating to 45% favorable (meaning already half the nation doesn't like her)
boston bean
(36,224 posts)and to them it sounds odd after over 200 years hearing of men giving them.
diamondhead
(54 posts)Elizabeth Warren gives a great speech. Hillary does not.
bettyellen
(47,209 posts)Marrah_G
(28,581 posts)Little Star
(17,055 posts)And you can bet your bippy I'm being honest. Loved her cadence and her message both.
brooklynite
(94,926 posts)Al Gore: 50,999,897
George Bush: 50,456,002
Care to try again?
diamondhead
(54 posts)But the electoral college was all that mattered, wasn't it?
At the end of the day, you have to focus on WHAT MATTERS. Oratory skills matter. More than you probably think.
aint_no_life_nowhere
(21,925 posts)I hope you're not suggesting that.
MADem
(135,425 posts)Nixon was no Demosthenes, either.
At the end of the day, we DO have to focus on what matters--you're having a tough time figuring that out, quite obviously.
Blanks
(4,835 posts)He spent the entire month of January practicing for his State of the Union address, and he still sucked.
Both Gore and Kerry beat him. The election was stolen both times. I've never heard anyone speak highly of Bush's oratory skill.
He was a moron and morons voted for him because he seemed like a 'regular' person, they liked him because he seemed like the guy sitting next to you on the bar stool. Except that the guy sitting next to you was probably smart enough not to choke on a pretzel.
Scootaloo
(25,699 posts)She's better than Kerry ever was, though. And vastly better than any of the gibbering stumblefucks the Republicans will run.
Oratory is a skill. some people are better a it than others. And I hope your standard isn't set to Barack Obama, because that dude is one of the best orators I've ever seen.
I wouldn't bother calling this, of all things, one of Cliton's "weaknesses," becuase I don't vote for people based on their ability to maintain strong cadence.
Hekate
(90,994 posts)Have we met before?
Bobbie Jo
(14,341 posts)Embracing the noob.
Enemy, enemy, friend, etc..
mooseprime
(474 posts)i stopped posting a long time ago because of the kind of responses i see in this thread. people seem to delight in picking up the wrong part of someone's writing and then pile on like football fans: my team is awesome, your team sucks, nyah nyah nyah. black and white, all right or all wrong. reminds me of children arguing i did not you did so. it's astonishing that people have already picked their teams a year and a half out and are not going to consider anything that is said or done for all the remaining time, when in fact it's only just now beginning. novel idea: wait until you've heard some substantive debate and proposals of practical solutions before throwing all in with someone. issues and policy, not who gets the most valentines. let's challenge them all on everything now, during the courtship, or the marriage is going to be hell. diamondhead, good for you for speaking up. hope you can stay above all this ad hominem childishness.
Joe Turner
(930 posts)That's how she is and her problem is that she has a hard time concealing her true personality. If she wins the democratic primary she will go down to defeat in the general election. Have we had enough of this "it's my turn" nonsense and elect someone with fresh ideas.
madamesilverspurs
(15,814 posts)before the speech did you have this written?
sabrina 1
(62,325 posts)So that kind of blows your theory about his 'downhominess'.
And fyi, what actually does matter is what they DO, not so much what they say or how they say it, if it isn't backed up by action.
Starry Messenger
(32,342 posts)It happens: http://www.democraticunderground.com/10026829255
Rosa Luxemburg
(28,627 posts)Hillary speaks well.
roody
(10,849 posts)rurallib
(62,477 posts)I listened to the content and it was great.
Been on DU a week? welcome, I guess.
Democrats talking like Democrats scaring the bejezus out of the Kochs and their ilk. It's music to me.
Phentex
(16,334 posts)but he was smooth as silk.
It did seem mechanical at first but I felt she got better as she went along. At least she doesn't sound like a preacher!
winter is coming
(11,785 posts)I doubt this speech will hurt her, as it was merely a bag of platitudes and feel-good statements. Most candidates do that sort of thing for their kick-off speeches. If she goes on offering empty quips, that will hurt her. She's run for President before and it's surprising to no one that she's running again. If she doesn't have concrete ideas about what she hopes to do in office, or is unwilling to share them, that's going to catch up to her long before the primary season ends, and perhaps even before it begins.
qazplm
(3,626 posts)so I don't see her poll numbers taking a hit.
I won't disagree that she has a charisma issue, but so do all of the republican candidates...not a single one of them has much of it either.
HereSince1628
(36,063 posts)DemocratSinceBirth
(99,719 posts)But neither was LBJ, Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bush Pere, and Geoge Walker Bush and they did just fine..
This is all subjective any way but most communications experts would rate a JFK, a Ronald Reagan and a Barack Obama highly. Their delivery was excellent.
Any way she's not running against herself... The only two good orators on the other side are The Huckster and The Cruz and neither are getting close to the nomination and even if they did their oratory can't compensate for how out of the mainstream they are...
BTW, the OP conflated emapthy with oratory. They are different skills. i thought bill Clinton was charismastic but an ordinary speaker...He was excellent at being empathetic.
PADemD
(4,482 posts)I totally agree with your analysis. When Hillary speaks, she comes across as an attorney trying to convince a jury. At times, she hangs on a word as though she hasn't finished thinking about the rest of the sentence. It's very irritating. If she becomes President, the mute button on my remote will be getting a workout.
I'm getting the same impression of her that I had in 2008.
LordGlenconner
(1,348 posts)I have news: he's not. She's no Obama in that realm, but then again who is.
She did fine.
I thought you Bernie folks were all about substance anyway.
Cha
(297,939 posts)kentuck
(111,111 posts)She can do better but it wasn't bad.
Although I have been a Bernie supporter for some time, I think Hillary is the frontrunner at this time. The little bird on your shoulder keeps repeating, "Bush-Clinton, Bush-Clinton, Bush-Clinton......"
DemocratSinceBirth
(99,719 posts)I don't see Bush lll, Walker, or Rubio lighting up a room.
kentuck
(111,111 posts)Bernie has a chance. Simply because of the ascendancy of progressivism. People are tired of the bullshit in Washington. They are looking for change.
DemocratSinceBirth
(99,719 posts)Cheese Sandwich
(9,086 posts)Doctor_J
(36,392 posts)text that her writers put together. I think that the issues she's passionate about are those on which she aligns with the republicans, which of course she won't talk about On Most democratic issues she was on the republican side until recently. Hopefully we'll see some real debates to find out what she plans to do on important issues.
doc03
(35,432 posts)global1
(25,294 posts)she is a terrible speaker or reader of speeches. There is something about her voice that emits a sense of unbelievability to me. She doesn't sound sincere. She tends to speak in sound bytes - almost like she is spitting back that which is learned from focus groups. I have a problem listening to her when she speaks.
I don't know if she feels that she needs to project a Presidential personna and that is why she speaks like she does or if she just doesn't have the speechifying skills.
She needs to be herself when she talks and that would help her immensely. She should talk to us like she would be talking to a friend.
Listen to a Barbara Boxer speak. Or an Elizabeth Warren. Or Claire McCaskill. They all come off as very credible and real.
If there are any of Hillary's advisors reading this - you really need to work with her on he speaking skills. She is probably the person most qualified ever to be President - based on her experience - but she needs to learn how to speak to her constituents. Granted she got very far in her career to this point. I just don't see her coming off good should she have a fireside chat with us.
I admit - she has a hard act to follow - because President Obama is the best. When I hear him talk or when he is answering a question or wanting to educate us - I feel like he is talking directly to me. I just don't get that same vibe from Hillary.
I offer this as constructive criticism. Please don't shoot the messenger here.
BlindTiresias
(1,563 posts)Which is fine if the person has substance or real thought to their positions, but she doesn't have that either.
A soulless zombie shambling the earth in search of a constituency is the best way I could describe her overall character.
quadrature
(2,049 posts)nothing is left to chance.
she went thru this speech ten times or more.
the only thing not timed are 'applause interruptions',
there is some wiggle room for that.
next comes here standard stump speech.
what you see is what you get.
AtomicKitten
(46,585 posts)DemocratSinceBirth
(99,719 posts)eom
hrmjustin
(71,265 posts)hrmjustin
(71,265 posts)Andy823
(11,495 posts)Their agenda was so obvious, yesterday they attack Clinton, today they were attacking O'Malley, how long before they went after Bernie? The thing that really gets me is the number of people who actually rec'd this thread.
hrmjustin
(71,265 posts)Veldrick
(73 posts)There are worse.
rocktivity
(44,583 posts)If you don't know your history, you're doomed to repeat it...
rocktivity