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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Sep-15-07 01:43 PM
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X-post from the Lounge: The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poem Thread, 9/15/07 Bonus
"Work"

1.

They say,
What would you like to do
or where would you like to work
they chop my solid twenty-four into segments.
You geet two hourse for waking, showering, eating.
One to two traveling then at least
eight there.
One to two more traveling home
supper a quick fuck or three beers
then sleep eight and wake up again to shower, eat, travel, work, travel, quick fuck,
sleep, wake, shower until they merge and flow like
molten lava and I say,
Yes, but I get two weeks vacation
per year, ten holidays, twelve
sick days and one floating personal
day to live and I feel
like the negative space between the bars of a jail cell
that farts freedom in your face.
These men, shelling out salaries
of death sandwiches
for my half hour lunch break

2.

They say,
What would you like to do
or where would you like to work.
I think, Earth. I'd like to work
on Earth, third in from the sun.
Does the bear say,
I work in this section of the forest.
Does the eagle say,
I work in this part of space.
Does the Shark say,
I swim only here.
Does the air work or the wind.
And what kind of work do I want to do?
I say,
I want to eat and sleep and explore
like the bear and the eagle and the shark.
I want to speak like the wind and breathe air
period.
I want to hang a sign on my door:
Do not disturb while I'm at work
dreaming.
They say,
this is lazy.
They say,
you are worthless.
They say,
you have no ambition.
And I tell them,
I am an unambitious worthless problem
like the air and the wind.
I will sleep and dream like the air and
move in passion like the wind
when it pleases me and for
no one.

3.

They say,
What would you like to do
or where would you like to work.
They tell me,
Do something you like to do,
life is wonderful when you
like your job.
I tell them,
It is an oxymoron to like
your job
as if a convict ever loves
his cell.
They say,
Learn to drive a tractor trailer or fix
automobile transmissions or
learn to weld or fix toilets
or serve drinks with paper umbrellas to people under the
shade and I think,
No one likes to work
the name itself implies
contempt, a comfortable
contempt like the old convict who
after years
accepts his cell as home.
Some people like their jobs,
they say
and I think,
Who?
Who likes their job?
Does the garbageman really like picking up shit all day?
Do tellers like to sit all day behind a bullet proof
glass wall?
Even poets don't really like to teach workshops.
(I have heard them say this.)
Fill ketchup bottles, stuff sausages, clean pots
or sell hot dogs and cigarettes.
And if you say,
Doctors love their work or dentists love
their work or lawyers or engineers or stock brokers
then why,
why do they value their
vacations as much as the
garbageman and the teller and the sausage stuffer and
the pot cleaner?
Baseball players like their work
some actors and poets and
all sleepers who dream.

4.

What kind of things perpetuate work?
Cancer,
yes cancer makes work.
It makes work for surgeons and people who run
self-examination breast programs.
It makes work for social workers and therapists
and nurses and chemical manufacturers and the people
who clean the floors in hospitals
and those who make the paper cups in hospital
bathrooms and makers of
high fiber cereals and
morticians and casket makers and
people who supply the metal for
ash carrying urns and for the miners
or iron ore used for metal
ash carrying urns
and for florists and greeting card companies.
It makes work for
wig makers and sellers of wigs
and for plastic tube makers
and journalists and typesetters
and single parent rap group organizers
and ecologists and environmentalists
and lab technicians
and surgeons and people who run
self-examination breast programs.
Oh, I've said that already.

5.

Factories would close without
workers
but plants would still grow
wind would still blow
mountains would still fold.
Wiithout prison guards there would be
no prisons.
And doctors could not work without
orderlies and secretaries
the dry cleaners
the house cleaners
the supermarket stock boys
the tellers
the mechanics and the fixers of
automobile transmissions and toilets

Armies could not function without
foot sodiers.
We have set this naightmare into motion and
we can stopit.
Quit!
Fighting for full employment is not the answer
Fight for full
unemployment.

Everybody,
set your alarm for noon or turn it off and sleep
until you want to get up.
Bears do this, cats do this, birds do this
so why should we be any different
inhabitants on this third planet in
from the sun
somewhere spinning and revolving in the
universe
yes, the universe is not up there
it's here
and we are in it.
Quit and sleep.
Sleep and dream.
Stop it
stop it
you're killing me.

—Peter Spiro
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Sep-15-07 01:55 PM
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1. Please direct all flames to wildhorses in the Lounge.
This was her idea.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Sep-15-07 02:38 PM
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2. BlueIris posts poetry in the Lounge every day, for those interested.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Sep-15-07 04:04 PM
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3. Well, thanks for not mocking me, anyway.
I was curious to see how this would be received here.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-16-07 06:02 AM
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4. (Looks around, paranoid)
At least I wasn't flamed.
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Callalily Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-16-07 07:33 AM
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5. Our lives in segments?
Yes, that's the way I feel most of the time.

Great poem, BlueIris!
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-16-07 07:55 AM
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6. Thanks!
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-16-07 08:10 AM
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7. Oh, and here's what it was supposed to look like, properly formatted:
Edited on Sun Sep-16-07 08:18 AM by BlueIris
(thanks, muriel_volestrangler!)

"Work"

1. 

They say, 
     What would you like to do 
or where would you like to work 
     they chop my solid twenty-four into segments. 
You geet two hourse for waking, showering, eating. 
One to two traveling then at least 
eight there. 
One to two more traveling home 
supper a quick fuck or three beers 
then sleep eight and wake up again to shower, eat, travel,
work, travel, quick fuck, 
sleep, wake, shower until they merge and flow like 
molten lava and I say, 
     Yes, but I get two weeks vacation 
	    per year, ten holidays, twelve 
	    sick days and one floating personal 
	    day to live and I feel 
like the negative space between the bars of a jail cell 
that farts freedom in your face. 
	    These men, shelling out salaries 
	    of death sandwiches 
	    for my half hour lunch break 

2. 

They say, 
	    What would you like to do 
or where would you like to work. 
	    I think, Earth. I'd like to work 
	    on Earth, third in from the sun. 
Does the bear say, 
	    I work in this section of the forest. 
Does the eagle say, 
	    I work in this part of space. 
Does the Shark say, 
	    I swim only here. 
Does the air work or the wind. 
	    And what kind of work do I want to do? 
I say, 
	    I want to eat and sleep and explore 
	like the bear and the eagle and the shark. 
    I want to speak like the wind and breathe air 
					                                                         
  period. 
I want to hang a sign on my door: 
	    Do not disturb while I'm at work 
		       dreaming. 
They say, 
	     this is lazy. 
They say, 
	    you are worthless. 
They say, 
	    you have no ambition. 
And I tell them, 
	    I am an unambitious worthless problem 
like the air and the wind. 
I will sleep and dream like the air and 
move in passion like the wind 
when it pleases me and for 
no one. 

3. 

They say, 
	    What would you like to do 
or where would you like to work. 
They tell me, 
	    Do something you like to do, 
	    life is wonderful when you 
	    like your job. 
I tell them, 
	    It is an oxymoron to like 
	    your job 
	    as if a convict ever loves 
	    his cell. 
They say, 
	    Learn to drive a tractor trailer or fix 
	    automobile transmissions or 
	    learn to weld or fix toilets 
	    or serve drinks with paper umbrellas to people under the 
shade and I think, 
No one likes to work 
the name itself implies 
contempt, a comfortable 
	    contempt like the old convict who 
	    after years 
	    accepts his cell as home. 
Some people like their jobs, 
	       they say 
		                   and I think, 
			                           Who? 
Who likes their job? 
Does the garbageman really like picking up shit all day? 
Do tellers like to sit all day behind a bullet proof 
glass wall? 
Even poets don't really like to teach workshops. 
(I have heard them say this.) 
Fill ketchup bottles, stuff sausages, clean pots 
or sell hot dogs and cigarettes. 
And if you say, 
Doctors love their work or dentists love 
their work or lawyers or engineers or stock brokers 
then why, 
	    why do they value their 
vacations as much as the 
garbageman and the teller and the sausage stuffer and 
the pot cleaner? 
Baseball players like their work 
some actors and poets and 
all sleepers who dream. 

4. 

What kind of things perpetuate work? 
		                       Cancer, 
yes cancer makes work. 
It makes work for surgeons and people who run 
self-examination breast programs. 
It makes work for social workers and therapists 
and nurses and chemical manufacturers and the people 
who clean the floors in hospitals 
and those who make the paper cups in hospital 
bathrooms and makers of 
high fiber cereals and 
	          morticians and casket makers and 
	          people who supply the metal for 
	          ash carrying urns and for the miners 
	          or iron ore used for metal 
	ash carrying urns 
and for florists and greeting card companies. 
	          It makes work for 
	            wig makers and sellers of wigs 
	               and for plastic tube makers 
	                  and journalists and typesetters 
	                    and single parent rap group organizers 
	                      and ecologists and environmentalists 
	                        and lab technicians 
	                          and surgeons and people who run 
	                            self-examination breast programs.

Oh, I've said that already. 

5. 

Factories would close without 
	          workers 
but plants would still grow 
wind would still blow 
mountains would still fold. 
	         Wiithout prison guards there would be 
no prisons. 
And doctors could not work without
	         orderlies and secretaries
	         the dry cleaners
	         the house cleaners
	         the supermarket stock boys
	         the tellers
	         the mechanics and the fixers of 
	         automobile transmissions and toilets

Armies could not function without
foot sodiers.
We have set this naightmare into motion and
	         we can stopit.
				                                             Quit!
Fighting for full employment is not the answer
          Fight for full
		                       unemployment.

Everybody,
	         set your alarm for noon or turn it off and sleep
until you want to get up.
	         Bears do this, cats do this, birds do this
so why should we be any different
inhabitants on this third planet in
from the sun
somewhere spinning and revolving in the 
universe
yes, the universe is not up there
it's here
and we are in it.
	         Quit and sleep.
	         Sleep and dream.
	         Stop it
stop it
	         you're killing me.

—Peter Spiro
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Crowdance Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-16-07 09:31 AM
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8. Amen, Blue Iris.
I think Peter Spiro is having my thoughts. it's great to see this here,and great to know I'm not the only one.
I think GD is a great place to post this,btw, because I'm not a Lounge denizen. I bet I'm not the only one.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Sep-16-07 09:52 AM
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9. Hmmmm. You might not be the only one, but...um...er...
I'm not sure I could get away with that. Not all of the poems I've lined up to post are necessarily "General Discussion" appropriate. (Plus, I really fear the flames I would get.) But I'll take it under advisement.
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