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catbert836 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-13-06 07:19 PM
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Where the Sea meets the Sky
Edited on Thu Apr-13-06 07:19 PM by catbert836
Often, I go to a shore
where I can see the lake, and feel
the winds breath on my face
the waves sound on my ears
the waters sight on my eyes

There, I see the place
where the sea meets the sky
and the two elements meld
rippling magically

I wonder what is out there
where the sea meets the sky
what mysterious realm exists there
what creatures roam its invisible paths
what shifting landscapes one could view

Some day, I will
get up and leave the shore
and walk across the water
floating quietly

And if you want to find me
after Ive gone, just look
to where the sea meets the sky

Written by yours truly :). What do you guys think? I'm only an amateur poet and writer, with no formal training so far.
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Xipe Totec Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-24-06 08:36 PM
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1. Thank you
Beautiful poem.

It made me remember a South American song, Alfonsina and the Sea.

For that, and for sharing your beautiful work, thank you.


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catbert836 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu May-04-06 05:21 PM
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2. No problem.
And thanks so much! What you said means a lot. :pals:
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