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AlienGirl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-30-05 02:56 PM
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No Bicycle
No Bicycle

So now I'm a fish
with no bicycle.
Feeling awkward, exposed to winds
(should I say currents?) of fate,
feeling like a lost appendage, the missing
piece of something bigger.

I'm still waiting to see
if my lungs can adapt
to this water.
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superconnected Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue May-31-05 03:15 AM
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1. I like the end
It really brings it together.
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JitterbugPerfume Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-02-05 11:45 AM
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2. Tucker--
Ilove your way of looking at life


you are an origional
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pinerow Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jun-10-05 08:08 AM
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3. very nice...so much can be said in so little space...
I love it...!!
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EFerrari Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jul-05-05 01:29 PM
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4. I like this
fish learning how to swim. cool. :)
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