Transparency: a poem

[CaliforniaPeggy]

blue-green
waves break
over

the sun
sets behind

the flash
shines through

me.

transparent
wave
rolls my
heart

I am drowning

in the floating
sea

the wind
beats
the wave

shines the sun.
my
heart

you see
it clearly

you have left your mark

those who can
will
see

I am
the
transparency


© 2010 MLC

[vixengrl]

1. Lovely, Peggy. Very evocative.

The sea imagery is in tune with the emotional flotsam suggested. I like it.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

2. My dear vixengrl...

I love it when my metaphors are consistent...

A recent photo of a cresting wave that I took inspired me...the sun shone through it...

Thank you so much!

[abq e streeter]

3. Thanks for once again sharing your talent for painting pictures with your words

[CaliforniaPeggy]

4. My dear abq e streeter...

It is always my pleasure to share with you...

Thank you for your very kind words...

[Prisoner_Number_Six]

5. Evocative.

Each poem you create is a special moment of time captured for eternity.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

6. My dear Prisoner_Number_Six...

Mmm...I like what you've said here...

And I thank you...

It means a lot to have you read, and comment.

[Dystopian]

7. I am the transparency

Beautiful, Peggy:hug:
We all are....and you sang the truth with your words.
A simple truth written with clarity and intensity in metaphor....
I love it...I love that I can identify with your poetry....


peace~

[CaliforniaPeggy]

8. My dear Dystopian!

Ah, sweetie...I love it that you identify with my poetry too!

I thank you for your very kind remarks, and for that beautiful flower-holding smiley...

:hug:

[seaker]

9. Shoot...

Now I am all wet and happy..Thank you Peggy/:loveya:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

10. My dear seaker!

Hey, look out for the wave! Oops.....too late!

Thanks, sweetie...

I'm glad it made you happy!

:loveya: too!