The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Tue 6/9/2009)

[RetroLounge]

Surrender

Supine under branches
and blossoms, eavesdropping
on a hummingbird,
the high-pitched flutter
of her seed-sized heart.
Drunk on the scent of apricots.
My spine's thirty-three stones
lined up on the new grass.

I'm a rosy dot on a map's
patch of green, my naked toes
pointing east below gobbets
of buttery sun. Between journeys,
obstacles: water and rock, iron
and chalk dust, the white ribs
of the fence and the gopher's
freshly dug holes.

Petals in tatters on my bare thigh.
the screen door's wheeze
doesn't bother me, the news
still rolled in its red rubber band.

Right now I'm nowhere and no one
cares. Nothing needs me but the dirt
beneath me. The sky gazes down
and doesn't see me. Even the wind

is like a mother, thinking of her lover,
as she parts my hair.

Dorianne Laux

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Dorianne Laux’s fourth book of poems, Facts about the Moon (W.W. Norton), was the recipient of the Oregon Book Award and was short-listed for the Lenore Marshall Poetry Prize. Laux is also author of Awake (1990) What We Carry (1994) Smoke (2000) and Superman: The Chapbook (2008). She taught for 15 years at the University of Oregon in Eugene and since 2004, at Pacific University's Low-Residency MFA Program. She and her husband, poet Joseph Millar, recently moved to Raleigh where she joins the faculty at North Carolina State University.

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:hi:

RL

[Sky Masterson]

1. I like it!

it has the word "map's" in it. :crazy:

[RetroLounge]

4. Oh!

I'm a rosy dot on a map's
patch of green...

Sounds dirty in that context...

:hi:

RL

[Sky Masterson]

7. I wasn't going to mention that part

but I did notice that. :evilgrin::dunce:

[blueraven95]

2. Good Morning!

:hi:

[RetroLounge]

3. Good Morning

:hi:

RL

[Tuesday Afternoon]

5. Yep

I would tell you what it means to me, but it is kind of morbid.
I really like this one though. Bkmrkng, and thanks.

[RetroLounge]

6. Your'e welcome...

:hi:

RL

[CaliforniaPeggy]

8. Yes.

I love it! So fresh, so vivid. Damn.

Thank you, my dear Retro.

:hi:

[RetroLounge]

11. ...

:hi:

RL

[Chorophyll]

9. Aaaahhhhhh! Love it.

:hi:

[RetroLounge]

12. Hey you!

:hi:

:hug:

RL

[Chorophyll]

15. Hey back!

And while I admit to copy-catting you on the avatar pic, I swear I didn't mean to swipe your sig line! I'm just so pissed off today. x(

:hug:

[RetroLounge]

16. I'm with you all the way...

Swipe away, copy cat, whatever it takes...

:hug:

RL

[BlueIris]

10. Ah, more Ms. Dorianne. nt

[RetroLounge]

13. Can never have too much....

:hi:

RL

[BlueIris]

14. This is true. nt