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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Nov-10-08 08:16 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Mon 11/10/2008)
Man Tries to Commit Suicide With a Crossbow

          For Thomas Lux

And fails. First, imagine the weapon
pointing heavenward beneath his chin. After the trigger’s
quick tick, the following: what, for said
undead, must have sounded like a rocket’s stratospheric crash,
which is to say the arrow just
crested the crown (i.e. it got stuck). At which point, the head
now a kebob, said undead had
the wherewithal to unscrew the skewer
from the little lodged missile and pull it out. To walk
to the emergency room.

I love to think
grace takes strange shapes: the arrow
balm to the howl of neurons.
To think of that walk beneath the velvet night.
Stay with me. Don’t think
headache. Think
instead: the stars’ ancient light warming
his just budding horn.

Ross Gay

****************

:hi:

RL
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Chorophyll Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Nov-10-08 08:42 AM
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1. Ouch.
I have to think about this one for a while.

:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Nov-10-08 01:26 PM
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6. Painful...
:hi:

RL
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Nov-10-08 11:01 AM
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2. reminds me of a song ...a line of it:
As the tracer glides
In its graceful arc
Send a little prayer out to ya
cross the falling dark


don't know why. Just did.


:donut: :hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Nov-10-08 04:21 PM
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7. ...
:hi:

RL
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YankeyMCC Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Nov-10-08 11:10 AM
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3. hey nt
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Nov-10-08 05:12 PM
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8. hey
:hi:

RL
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blueraven95 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Nov-10-08 11:17 AM
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4. morning, Retro
:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Nov-10-08 05:42 PM
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9. Afternoon
:hi:

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Nov-10-08 12:03 PM
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5. My dear Retro!
Well, this one is pretty strange!

Interesting imagery too...

Thank you...

:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Nov-10-08 06:38 PM
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10. ...
:hi:

RL
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Nov-10-08 09:03 PM
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11. Funny. nt
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Nov-10-08 09:51 PM
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12. Hello you!
:hi:

RL
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