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Haole Girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Oct-25-07 10:30 PM
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Inspired by CaliforniaPeggy, but certainly not about her!
"To Know"

The moon didn't seem as bright

it's already cold

not yet midnight

How does one know

sometimes

when it's time to go?

Alone

and old

It's time

Even the fool knows

The moon didn't help this time

...didn't even seem to shine

There are so many things we think we know

So many things we hope we'll see

But toward the end

often

it's a pitiful plea

And the broken heart wins out

and the pain is just a shout

and the tears can't stop

Yes, it's time to go.
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SPKrazy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Oct-25-07 10:35 PM
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1. I can relate to that well
alone

and old

it's time to go

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Haole Girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Oct-25-07 10:50 PM
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3. Just so you know
The poem has nothing to do with you.

And, btw, those lines didn't go together in the poem.
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SPKrazy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Oct-25-07 10:52 PM
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5. it wouldn't matter if it did have to do with me
Edited on Thu Oct-25-07 10:52 PM by Southpawkicker
but yeah i see they don't go together

an example of seeing what we want to see

on edit: it is a nice poem

sad, but beautiful
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Haole Girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Oct-25-07 10:55 PM
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6. Take care of yourself
Focus on your young son. It's all that really matters.
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SPKrazy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Oct-25-07 10:57 PM
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7. thank you KC
I know I don't deserve that from you

so that makes it very kind
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Oct-25-07 10:40 PM
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2. My dear KC2...
Aw, sweetie....

Thank you!

And I love this beautiful, sad poem...

Keep 'em coming, OK?

:loveya:
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Haole Girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Oct-25-07 10:51 PM
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4. Thank you Peggy!
:loveya:
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From The Ashes Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Oct-25-07 11:06 PM
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8. KC2...
:hi: I need to PM you, could you turn it back on? :hi::hug:
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Haole Girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Oct-25-07 11:09 PM
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9. OK
:hi: :hug:
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From The Ashes Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Oct-25-07 11:13 PM
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10. Mail Call!!
:hi:
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Haole Girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Oct-26-07 08:11 AM
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11. Hey
I sent you a PM back. Just so you know... I meant what I said. :hi: :hug: :hug:
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