Inspired by CaliforniaPeggy, but certainly not about her!
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Thu Oct-25-07 10:30 PM
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Inspired by CaliforniaPeggy, but certainly not about her!
"To Know" The moon didn't seem as bright it's already cold not yet midnight How does one know sometimes when it's time to go? Alone and old It's time Even the fool knows The moon didn't help this time ...didn't even seem to shine There are so many things we think we know So many things we hope we'll see But toward the end often it's a pitiful plea And the broken heart wins out and the pain is just a shout and the tears can't stop Yes, it's time to go.
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Thu Oct-25-07 10:35 PM
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1. I can relate to that well
alone and old it's time to go
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Thu Oct-25-07 10:50 PM
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The poem has nothing to do with you. And, btw, those lines didn't go together in the poem.
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Thu Oct-25-07 10:52 PM
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5. it wouldn't matter if it did have to do with me
Edited on Thu Oct-25-07 10:52 PM by Southpawkicker
but yeah i see they don't go together an example of seeing what we want to see on edit: it is a nice poem sad, but beautiful
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Thu Oct-25-07 10:55 PM
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Focus on your young son. It's all that really matters.
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Thu Oct-25-07 10:57 PM
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I know I don't deserve that from you so that makes it very kind
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Thu Oct-25-07 10:40 PM
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Aw, sweetie.... Thank you! And I love this beautiful, sad poem... Keep 'em coming, OK? :loveya:
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Thu Oct-25-07 10:51 PM
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Thu Oct-25-07 11:06 PM
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:hi: I need to PM you, could you turn it back on? :hi::hug:
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Thu Oct-25-07 11:09 PM
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Fri Oct-26-07 08:11 AM
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I sent you a PM back. Just so you know... I meant what I said. :hi: :hug: :hug:
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