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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jul-14-07 09:05 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Sat 7/14/2007)
The Happiest Day

It was early May, I think
a moment of lilac or dogwood
when so many promises are made
it hardly matters if a few are broken.
My mother and father still hovered
in the background, part of the scenery
like the houses I had grown up in,
and if they would be torn down later
that was something I knew
but didn't believe. Our children were asleep
or playing, the youngest as new
as the new smell of the lilacs,
and how could I have guessed
their roots were shallow
and would be easily transplanted.
I didn't even guess that I was happy.
The small irritations that are like salt
on melon were what I dwelt on,
though in truth they simply
made the fruit taste sweeter.
So we sat on the porch
in the cool morning, sipping
hot coffee. Behind the news of the day--
strikes and small wars, a fire somewhere--
I could see the top of your dark head
and thought not of public conflagrations
but of how it would feel on my bare shoulder.
If someone could stop the camera then...
if someone could only stop the camera
and ask me: are you happy?
perhaps I would have noticed
how the morning shone in the reflected
color of lilac. Yes, I might have said
and offered a steaming cup of coffee.

Linda Pastan

****************

RL

If you have a request for a certain Poet, post their name in the thread and I will find a poem by them and post it...

if you want to see some of my poetry, see the blog at:
http://www.myspace.com/retropaul

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Haole Girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jul-14-07 09:20 AM
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1. Wow
Thank you for sharing this. I love it. To try and even describe how much I can identify with it would just sound stupid.







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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jul-14-07 02:30 PM
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6. Glad you like it...
She was suggested in yesterday's thread...

RL
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Justpat Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jul-14-07 11:04 AM
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2. Thank you, RL

I love just about everything she has written.



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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jul-14-07 11:19 AM
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3. patience is purple, i think --
and lilac is happiness
the palette of emotions
is a wonderful thing.

:donut::hi:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jul-14-07 11:26 AM
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4. Good morning, my dear Retro!
Ah, how lovely!

Somehow we don't always see those moments of happiness until much later........

And perhaps we shouldn't...

Isn't it better not to overanalyze?

Live in the moment, baby.......

Thank you...:hug:
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BarenakedLady Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jul-14-07 11:28 AM
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5. Very nice
Stop and smell the...lilacs. ;)
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