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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jun-08-07 08:27 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Fri 6/8/2007)
Great Cathedrals

Before a date, my college roommate
Used to drive his candy-apple red Camaro
Down to the car wash and spend the afternoon
Washing, waxing, vacuuming it,
Detailing the chrome strips, buffing the fenders,
Spraying the big expensive tires
With their raised white lettering

That said something like Intruder
Or Marauder, with a silicone spray
Until they were slick and dark as sex.
He polished that car as if each caress,
Each pass of the chamois, each loving
Stroke of the terry cloth would increase,

By measurable degrees,
The likelihood that in the immaculate
Front seat, with its film of freshly applied
Vinyl cleaner, at the end of a cul-de-sac
Somewhere above the campus,
She would consent to be rubbed
And buffed just as lovingly.

We do what we can,
And if God is no more impressed
By the cathedral at Chartres
Than by a righteously clean and cherry
Camaro, at least He can't say
We haven't tried

With all our might to conceal our fear
That we have little else to offer
Than stained glass or polished chrome,
The elbow grease of our good intentions.

So I'm happy to see
That in the Christmas card photo he sent
Mark stands, balding now,
With a dignified gut, a pretty wife,
And a couple of nice-looking kids, in front
Of the great cathedral
Like the sweet vision of a future
He'd been vouchsafed one day
Long ago, through Turtle Wax
On a gleaming hubcap.

George Bilgere


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RL

If you have a request for a certain Poet, post their name in the thread and I will find a poem by them and post it...

if you want to see some of my poetry, see the blog at:
http://www.myspace.com/retropaul


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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jun-08-07 08:36 AM
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1. wo0t
:thumbsup:
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Justpat Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jun-08-07 08:37 AM
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2. I have never heard of this guy.
I'll have to look him up.

love the poem. OB
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xchrom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jun-08-07 10:20 AM
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3. sigh -- sex in camaros --
sometimes life is really, really good.
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BarenakedLady Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jun-08-07 10:21 AM
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4. Bitchin Camaro
:thumbsup:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jun-08-07 12:00 PM
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5. Good morning, my dear Retro!
Ah, college days, and the seduction made possible by a shiny red Camaro!

This is great...

Thank you...:hug:
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