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MonkeyFunk Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 08:25 PM
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Poll question: Should poetry rhyme?
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 08:46 PM
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1. My dear MonkeyFunk!
I voted "no."

Of course it can.......

But it doesn't have to!

:hi:
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MonkeyFunk Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 08:48 PM
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3. CaliforniaPeggy
is very leggy.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 08:49 PM
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5. LOL!
I am.......how did you know?

:rofl:

And yes......it rhymes!
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Rockit Donating Member (240 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 08:48 PM
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2. O Hell no!
Yes, I am well aware that rhymed!
:evilgrin:
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MonkeyFunk Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 08:49 PM
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4. Rockit
has a pocket.
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Rockit Donating Member (240 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 09:02 PM
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10. MonkeyFunk
got the junk, that make the pary bump
Rockit be pluggin in like an electrical socket
What's up, D.U.? You know you wanna rock it!

Breakin' it off like a piece of choc-lit???

<insert phat beats here>

:headbang:
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Blue-Jay Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 08:52 PM
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6. Not necessarily.
I see what you did
Alert! I told my cabal
bitch bitch bitch bitch bitch.

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MonkeyFunk Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 08:54 PM
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7. Mark!
Poster.
Showster.

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EFerrari Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 08:57 PM
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8. Depends on what you're up to!
lol


1. Yellow leaves



From the cabin window in the morning,

deer eating yellow leaves

under a tree.

What kind I asked and Doug said I don't know.

After nearly half a century I said why

don't we know. California .



On the way home I said

same with this mountain range,

look, filling the windows on the right

side of the car. There's so much

to know about and there is so little

time, so little and so

good to have what you know

in hand like a charm,

or like another's hand.



There is a wish to cup knowing

a strong old wish, oppressive as the long flat freeway.



Were the leaves eaten do you think,

or maybe something underneath

something requiring burrowing,

some unseen good.


2

Black triangle in light


While the others sleep, the black cat

Sits on the sill in a rectangle of light,

The only one in the dark kitchen, still

As an unwatched sculpture. This morning,

A quiet waiting wedge, the cat eyes

Some gulls ferry between sky and sand.



Perhaps knowing how near the sand

Dunes are, across the highway only, the cat

Presses the glass, paws her reflection, eyes

Never leaving the gulls just beyond the light

Warming her screened perch. Slowly, it’s morning

In that window. She sits, watching, still.



And she might stay all day, watching still.

The smell of the sea, the ping of blown sand

Tease her to the glass, testing her each morning.

Ancient patience meets disregard in the cat

Who measures the gulls’ flight in the cold light,

Noting the ravens’ clatter too, with great green eyes.



So much unsaid by those wide eyes.

Yet something about her suggests, “Be still,

Or, come closer, I will jump into the light

You play in. You’re playing, I know. The sand

Smells like a beach a grain at a time.” The cat

Stretches gently, jumps, finished for this morning.



I’d thought to paint her, there, some morning.

How to give the motion of her stillness to other eyes?

Or, show color condensing around this small monochrome cat?

An early sketch shows promise but still

It’s only promise, not salt, flight or sand.

Here: A small black triangle on a pale plane of light.



She draws us there, summoning beach light

Slowly into the room. Brightest at mid morning,

But not bright now. The bunch grasses wave, trapping sand

Blown across the highway, and the surfers’ eyes

Narrow against the wind, the ones still

Too young for shades, as they pass by window and cat.



As if you could outwalk the light world of her eyes,

Or the day’s flight from morning, sweeping over the sand.

Or, forgive the still capture of this small black cat.

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Maddy McCall Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 08:59 PM
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9. Limericks should. :-)
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smoogatz Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 09:19 PM
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11. It does. With "shmoetry."
Any other questions?
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LostInAnomie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-06-07 09:24 PM
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12. The only poetry of any value are limericks!
Dirty ones! :nuke:
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MonkeyFunk Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Mar-07-07 02:09 AM
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13. There once was a man from Nantucket...
Edited on Wed Mar-07-07 02:09 AM by MonkeyFunk
who saw a fork in the woods, and took the path least-traveled.
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qwertyMike Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Mar-07-07 02:25 AM
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14. Limericks always rhyme - not necessary poetry
There was a young farmer from Kent
Whose ***** was excedingly bent
To save himeself trouble he put it in double
And instead of comming he went
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