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yardwork

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2. I think that is a great SoP.

Reply to laconicsax (Reply #1)

Sat Feb 18, 2012, 12:29 AM

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Current draft of SOP [View all] La Lioness Priyanka Feb 2012 OP

Possible re-wording (in bold) laconicsax Feb 2012 #1

I think that is a great SoP. yardwork Feb 2012 #2

I like this re-wording. n/t Gormy Cuss Feb 2012 #3

I like that! One small change. kdmorris Feb 2012 #4

That's a good change. laconicsax Feb 2012 #5

like this one very much. niyad Feb 2012 #6

excellent. Love it. La Lioness Priyanka Feb 2012 #7

couple more changes posted below La Lioness Priyanka Feb 2012 #11

Ok, I just posted on the other pinned thread, I hadn't seen this. MH1 Feb 2012 #8

i do not want to use the words born female, as it is exclusionary to trans women La Lioness Priyanka Feb 2012 #9

"born" was in the first, snarky version, not the second, because I noticed that too MH1 Feb 2012 #22

one more time La Lioness Priyanka Feb 2012 #10

I like this addition. Gormy Cuss Feb 2012 #13

Pri, I suggest that you update the OP as we decide on later drafts. Gormy Cuss Feb 2012 #12

done La Lioness Priyanka Feb 2012 #14

Yes. n/t Gormy Cuss Feb 2012 #15

I like that addition! n/t kdmorris Feb 2012 #16

I like it Irishonly Feb 2012 #17

I like it niyad Feb 2012 #18

In my opinion it should be reworded to be positive instead of negative Tx4obama Feb 2012 #19

I like that.. positive is the spirit of the message. Gormy Cuss Feb 2012 #20

I agree - keep it positive OKNancy Feb 2012 #21

very good niyad Feb 2012 #23

I disagree, but like it either way. laconicsax Feb 2012 #24

i tend to agree with you but am willing to give positivity a try La Lioness Priyanka Feb 2012 #25

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