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Response to Chan790 (Reply #9)

Wed May 22, 2013, 11:57 AM

10. Indeed.

But I think all it needs is the two changes I offered, and then a verb at the end (or perhaps you meant Lydia to be the one doing the devastation, and not the Dean, in which case a word needs to be taken out [i think - I can't see it in front of me now, so I go by memory] or the form of the verb needs to change).

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