Trying to write a fight scene for a book is way different than blocking one.

[Lady Freedom Returns]

2. I think some of my problem is to that she is not a good guy.

She is doing something good. It is NOT in the nature of her beast. I have wrote her to be well....

The only reason she is, is due to the fact that the young man in question did her, if she was human, a solid. She is confused as to why she is helping in the first place.

It is way easier if I write a scene for her to do this for pleasure. But this one is needing to be done for a good reason and she needs to hurry to get the kid to the hospital. the scene and the characters are waring with each other.