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Wed Feb 19, 2020, 02:55 PM


Hours and hours pass on by
Infinity by seconds
The past is catching up to me
The future comes to reckon

My judgement wasnít always clear
I didnít take advice
I donít believe itís a mistake
Unless you make it twice

The clock ticks down the minutes
As the minutes turn to days
Eternity has always been
The temptress of our ways

The promise of eternal youth
The fountain of my vice
Itís not a sin to drink from it
Unless you drink it twice

Forgive me from
All that Iíve done
I didnít do it twice

The time has come
To pay the price
Iíll have to pay it twice.

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Response to Tucker08087 (Original post)

Wed Feb 19, 2020, 04:30 PM

1. thanks

Lovely poem. It gives me something to think about concerning mistakes, and I like the rhythm you used.

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Wed Feb 19, 2020, 05:41 PM

2. Thank you!

Thank you very much! 💕

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