Mon Jan 10, 2022, 09:05 AM
Tucker08087 (596 posts)
Modern Day Shunning
After decades of writing and publishing poetry, I began working as a lyricist just before the pandemic. Working with musicians while staying isolated definitely kept me sane! All of our work was done remotely, although unfortunately the process of recording in the studio was halted.
Anyway, I would classify this song as folk. My poetry/lyrics are often within the storytelling genre. This one definitely fits that bill. There is music, but I don’t know how to share that. Modern Day Shunning Daisy skipped barefooted up to the church steps Every Sunday Nothing ‘tween her and hell but a silver toe ring Daisy bowed down to pick some flowers Her namesake And when the choir sang hymns, she would always sing When the service let out, Daisy’d reach into her basket Of daisies The townspeople kept on walking lest they turn to stone And with their pious eyes uplifted toward Heaven They walked right by the purest thing they’d ever known That’s the way they deal now with all the sinners That’s a modern day shunning in the name of God Put her picture on the internet so she remembers Exactly why she turned her back on this fraud When Daisy walked by, her feet looked light as air Like she was floating She always treated every person as the same She fed the hungry and housed the homeless And down-trodden But Daisy’s sin was never knowing her daddy’s name So they marched up to her cottage armed with leaflets And pamphlets They’d decided that Daisy needed to be saved But while they’d been busy judging, she’d been watching And waiting She knew how, behind closed doors, each one behaved That’s the way they deal now with all the sinners That’s a modern day shunning in the name of God Put her picture on the internet so she remembers Exactly why she turned her back on this fraud. Then one Sunday Daisy didn’t show up At church time Her basket empty right beside the red brick walk Nobody could imagine how she’d left with no one seeing In a small minded town all they do big is talk Then the sunlight hit a glimmer of silver In a clay brick They couldn’t get it out no matter how they tried And while nobody said it, you can bet that they all knew it While busy pointing fingers The rapture came and passed them by. That’s the way they deal now with all the sinners That’s a modern day shunning in the name of God Put her picture on the internet so she remembers Exactly why she turned her back on this fraud. That’s the way they deal now with all the sinners That’s a theme in the psalms they like to sing But don’t be surprised when you bend down to claim it To discover that the prize was never that silver ring. Daisy’s silver ring.
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Response to Tucker08087 (Original post)
Thu Jul 7, 2022, 08:54 PM
chowmama (117 posts)
1. I like it.
It could be not only folk, but quite bluesy.
It reminds me of another song (which is really quite different), called Louise. Bonnie Raitt sings it. |
Response to chowmama (Reply #1)
Mon Jul 11, 2022, 05:42 AM
Tucker08087 (596 posts)
2. Thank you!
You may be right! The way I’ve arranged the guitar probably does bring it closer to bluesy. Thanks for reading! 🥰
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