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Bridge Cafe (Original Post) Adsos Letter Sep 2016 OP
Love the texture of the deck. ManiacJoe Sep 2016 #1
Yes, and it's all concrete. Adsos Letter Sep 2016 #3
To me this is so good on many levels! Mira Sep 2016 #2
Thank you, Mira. Adsos Letter Sep 2016 #4

Adsos Letter

(19,459 posts)
3. Yes, and it's all concrete.
Thu Sep 15, 2016, 07:05 PM
Sep 2016

I was really drawn to the (vanishing point?) perspective it created. Always willing to be corrected on these things...

Mira

(22,380 posts)
2. To me this is so good on many levels!
Thu Sep 15, 2016, 08:48 AM
Sep 2016

Even the sign in the middle is important, which I might have cursed (or moved temporarily -- it breaks into the unworldly feel of the photo as a whole. It does that better even than the two figures, because they are so symmetrical as well, and look like little dolls that have been placed there on purpose.
What a fine job. And the black/white is the icing on this cake.

Adsos Letter

(19,459 posts)
4. Thank you, Mira.
Thu Sep 15, 2016, 07:23 PM
Sep 2016

You always provide such useful feedback, and I appreciate that.

I wish I could say that I purposely set up the shot to take advantage of those things you mentioned; however, I was primarily drawn to the (vanishing point perspective?) provided by the concrete deck lines; not only by the joints, but also by the alternating light/dark pattern. I was using a Tokina wide angle lens, and I figured the sign would help keep things interesting by providing an object in the foreground. And I thought it would probably look good in B&W. Everything else was a pleasant surprise (for instance: I was so focused on putting the café and sign where I wanted them in the frame that I barely noticed the couple sitting on the concrete bench).

Anyway, I really appreciate critiques of things I post, both positive and negative. I have a lot to learn.

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