Democratic Underground Latest Greatest Lobby Journals Search Options Help Login
Google

Grammar question

Printer-friendly format Printer-friendly format
Printer-friendly format Email this thread to a friend
Printer-friendly format Bookmark this thread
This topic is archived.
Home » Discuss » Archives » General Discussion (1/22-2007 thru 12/14/2010) Donate to DU
 
Cruzan Donating Member (806 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-09-10 09:57 PM
Original message
Grammar question
Edited on Tue Mar-09-10 10:07 PM by Cruzan
Consider this exchange:

That was an exciting movie, wasn't it?
Oh, do you think so? I am surprised you like it. I think it is rather disappointing.


The first sentence is in the past tense, the rest is in the present. Can that ever be considered correct? Or should the whole thing be in the past, as in:

That was an exciting movie, wasn't it?
Oh, did you think so? I am surprised you liked it. I thought it was rather disappointing.


EDIT: typo, sorry.
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
Cronus Protagonist Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-09-10 09:59 PM
Response to Original message
1. I am surprised like it.
It seems to me that something's missing from that sentence.
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
Rhiannon12866 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-09-10 10:01 PM
Response to Reply #1
2. you.
:shrug:
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
Cronus Protagonist Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-09-10 10:48 PM
Response to Reply #2
8. Could have been I or they or perhaps even anyone, and so on
This is a grammar OP, you know! lol :)
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
Rhiannon12866 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Mar-10-10 12:39 AM
Response to Reply #8
12. It seemed as if it should have been "you," to me...
And I think that the reply should be in the same tense as the original statement, but people don't talk the same way that they write, don't follow the same rules, and nobody seems to really notice... ;)
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
Cruzan Donating Member (806 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-09-10 10:09 PM
Response to Reply #1
7. Sorry, typo.
Now fixed.
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
sailor65 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-09-10 10:03 PM
Response to Original message
3. Your second example is correct except
for the missing "You" between "Surprised" and "Liked"

Both uses of "Did/Do you think so" were fine.
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
NYC_SKP Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-09-10 10:06 PM
Response to Original message
4. I'll give some latitude to these types of exchanges.
Movie watching takes place in real time, but movies are forever.

Consider this exchange, with bits of though and context in parentheses:

That was an exciting movie (to watch), wasn't it?

I think it is rather disappointing (as an example of film making).

~~~~~

If referring to the experience of seeing it earlier that evening, all comments should be in the past.

If referring to the film itself, present tense is acceptable.

"I did not enjoy 'Dude Where's My Car', I think it is a disappointing film."

~~~~~

:P
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
bemildred Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-09-10 10:06 PM
Response to Original message
5. There is nothing incorrect about either version,
except for the absence of "you" after "surprised".
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
Goblinmonger Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-09-10 10:07 PM
Response to Original message
6. I might even argue that only "thought" needs to be past tense.
Clearly "do" is fine because it is a response to what you are thinking right now based on what you have said. "Like" is a little trickier, but I would assume that the "liking" is still going on so it could be present. "Thought" should be past, though, IMHO, since it was something that happened during the film.
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
EFerrari Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-09-10 10:56 PM
Response to Original message
9. The custom is to talk about a work of art in the present tense
Edited on Tue Mar-09-10 10:56 PM by EFerrari
when you're critiquing it, "Robert Redford's new film is fast paced and beautifully written".

But, if you're describing your experience of that work, then the past tense would be fine to use, "I liked it when I watched it".
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
izquierdista Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-09-10 11:25 PM
Response to Original message
10. English and its superfluous tenses
To notice the difference is to be on the way to being a pedantic putz. Unless one's opinions vacillate like the wind, thought and think are equivalent, and liked still continues into the present. My advice? Learn a language that is not hamstrung by too many tenses. Then you can enjoy linguistic freedom.
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
TexasObserver Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-09-10 11:42 PM
Response to Original message
11. The events discussed are past tense in the former, present tense in the latter.
It is written properly.

That was an exciting movie, wasn't it?
Oh, do you think so? I am surprised you like it. I think it is rather disappointing.


The first sentence refers to the experience just shared, what is past tense. You saw the movie.

The second and successive sentences are in the present tense because they discuss what you're doing right now. You query. You are surprised. You think.

If you were describing this event in the past tense, you would write the entire thing in the past tense.

After we saw the movie, she commented that it was an exciting movie and suggested I agreed. I expressed my surprise to her that she liked it, and told her I was disappointed in it.
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
Cruzan Donating Member (806 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Mar-10-10 03:32 AM
Response to Reply #11
13. Sorry for being dense, but would that still apply to a shared experience clearly in the past?
For example:

(1) That was a great dinner we had last night, wasn't it?
Oh, did you think so? I am surprised you liked it. I thought it was rather disappointing.

vs.

(2) That was a great dinner we had last night, wasn't it?
Oh, do you think so? I am surprised you like it. I think it is rather disappointing.

Are you saying (1) is strictly grammatically wrong?

And I suppose there's also:

(3) That was a great dinner we had last night, wasn't it?
Oh, do you think so? I am surprised you liked it. I think it was rather disappointing.
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
Greyhound Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Mar-10-10 03:47 AM
Response to Reply #13
14. (3) is the correct version.
That is the only one in a consistent tense.

In (1), 'did' is incorrect because the previous question establishes the opinion in the present tense, while the following is written in past tense.

(2) is acceptable but awkward and since the meal was in the past, the past tense 'was' is better.


Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
Hannah Bell Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Mar-10-10 04:10 AM
Response to Reply #13
16. They're all fine.
Edited on Wed Mar-10-10 04:14 AM by Hannah Bell
He was tiresome (yesterday).
He is tiresome (in his essence; yesterday, today, & always or usually)
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
Hannah Bell Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Mar-10-10 04:05 AM
Response to Original message
15. "was an exciting movie" = the movie we just saw in the PAST.
Edited on Wed Mar-10-10 04:09 AM by Hannah Bell
"you think so," "I am surprised," "you like it." "I think," all = *now,* at this PRESENT time, as we're speaking.

"i thought" = when i saw it in the PAST.

"it was disappointing" to me when i saw it in the PAST.

The grammar is fine.

The grammar here is also fine:

"I think it is rather disappointing." "I think" (now, in the present) "it is disappointing" (in its essence, which remains the same in the PAST, PRESENT, & FUTURE).

Just as you could say both:

That was a good book (when I read it)
That is a good book (anytime you read it)


there's nothing wrong with the grammar.
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
DU AdBot (1000+ posts) Click to send private message to this author Click to view 
this author's profile Click to add 
this author to your buddy list Click to add 
this author to your Ignore list Tue Apr 23rd 2024, 10:49 AM
Response to Original message
Advertisements [?]
 Top

Home » Discuss » Archives » General Discussion (1/22-2007 thru 12/14/2010) Donate to DU

Powered by DCForum+ Version 1.1 Copyright 1997-2002 DCScripts.com
Software has been extensively modified by the DU administrators


Important Notices: By participating on this discussion board, visitors agree to abide by the rules outlined on our Rules page. Messages posted on the Democratic Underground Discussion Forums are the opinions of the individuals who post them, and do not necessarily represent the opinions of Democratic Underground, LLC.

Home  |  Discussion Forums  |  Journals |  Store  |  Donate

About DU  |  Contact Us  |  Privacy Policy

Got a message for Democratic Underground? Click here to send us a message.

© 2001 - 2011 Democratic Underground, LLC