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shadowknows69 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Mar-15-08 08:49 AM
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Repost from GD:P so maybe someone will see it;
"To soothe the savage beast" a poem for GD :P

Rant and rage and wreck my head
Reading religiously and rating the race
Shit, I should be in bed.

Pondering such people is pitiable;
Ponderous pontificating purposely pathetic
No wonder I'm so irritable

What winds will wail
Wanton whores writhing on the web
So their candidate will prevail

Heart hurting and acting histrionic
Hopefully hale and hearty; helping my herd
Accomplishing nothing; how ironic.

Sulking now and I'm seeking
Searching to soothe the savage serpent in my synapses
It's like my mind is leaking

Muse of music merry move me
marinate my mind in melody meandering or mournful
Fill my steps with rhythm and glee

The beast better now, bows and blows
Bards both beautiful and bluesy bathed my brain
Feeling better; renewed; on with the show!
S
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hermetic Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Mar-15-08 08:56 AM
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1. I sure never would
have seen it in GDP. I won't go there. Yeah, I'm a wuss. I don't like it when people yell at me and call me names.

That's a good one though, shadow. I like how you rhymed pitiable and irritable.
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shadowknows69 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Mar-15-08 09:10 AM
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4. It took me like half an hour to write that line lol
I write my self into an unrhymable corner a lot. Should discard the style altogether probably.
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annabanana Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Mar-15-08 08:58 AM
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2. Thanks for reposting this.
I too am "scarce" in GD-P these days.
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Hotler Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Mar-15-08 09:03 AM
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3. Thanks Shadow.
I feel the same way.
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