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linazelle Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-12-06 06:27 PM
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Stupid email
I have a very dear friend who is very religious. I've known her since high school. She sends me all kinds of things via email. In the past week though, I have received stuff like the tripe that follows. I truly believe, that as a religious person, she is thinking only of the prayerful aspect of this post.


I watched the flag pass by one day,
It fluttered in the breeze.
A young Marine saluted it,
And then he stood at ease..

I looked at him in uniform
So young, so tall, so proud,
With hair cut square and eyes alert
He'd stand out in any crowd.

I thought how many men like him
Had fallen through the years.
How many died on foreign soil
How many mothers' tears?

How many pilots' planes shot down?
How many died at sea
How many foxholes were soldiers' graves?
No, freedom isn't free.

I heard the sound of Taps one night,
When everything was still,
I listened to the bugler play
And felt a sudden chill.
I wondered just how many times
That Taps had meant "Amen,"

When a flag had draped a coffin.
Of a brother or a friend.

I thought of all the children,
Of the mothers and the wives,
Of fathers, sons and husbands
With interrupted lives.

I thought about a graveyard
At the bottom of the sea
Of unmarked graves in Arlington.
No, freedom isn't free.

Enjoy Your Freedom & God Bless Our Troops
Show Your Support Send This Page Along Today


When you receive this, please stop for a moment and
Say a prayer for our servicemen. There is nothing attached.... This can be very powerful.... Just send this to all the people in your address book. Do not stop the wheel, please.... Of all the gifts you could give a US Soldier, Prayer is the very best one.


I certainly don't want to stop getting emails from her, but I do want to send a reply to her and the other fifty people that she sent this to that is not too hard-hitting but that explains the truths we know. Help me to respond. Here is how I have begun...


My proposed response:

God knows that I pray to keep our soldiers out of harm's way. But I do more than pray for them. I write letters to the editors of newspapers that don't report the truth about the war because, if we want them to be safe, people have to know the truth.

The truth is, that over 2,300 of our troops have perished in a war that did not have to be fought--a war that has nothing to do with freedom. The war was started over WMDs. To claim that the war is being fought for our freedom is to romanticize it and to hide the ugly truth about why our soldiers are really dying. We must never forget that they are dying because of lies and by remembering that perhaps we can hold those who lied accountable for their senseless deaths.

Just today on the news we are hearing that the president lied in 2003 about WMD's. He was told then that there were no WMD's but he still told the American people that they were there. The president even revealed the secret identity of a CIA company and a CIA undercover agent in order to push for the war in Iraq because they told him there were no WMDs. This CIA company, called Jennings Brewster, was operating undercover for at least a decade just like the companies that you and I work for each day. Instead of doing real business though, they were actually protecting our freedom by collecting information about real terrorists around the world like Osama Bin Laden. By blowing their cover, we lost track of people who would and will likely do harm to us in the future.

My prayer for our soldiers is that those who sent them to their early graves; who will not even allow the returning coffins to be shown on TV; who sent them to war but have not attended even one of their 2,300 funerals; who won't even provide body armor to keep them from dying; who have shut down hundreds of VA hospitals around the country causing some soldiers to have up to six months' wait for treatment--my prayer is that these people who created this black mark on our nation's name, are brought to justice for these senseless deaths.

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electropop Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-12-06 06:30 PM
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1. Suggested closing line:
"Support our troops. Bring them home NOW."
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linazelle Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-12-06 06:31 PM
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2. Good one. Adding it. nt
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rpannier Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-12-06 06:34 PM
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3. To be honest
As a former soldier...
I find it rather moving. I like it.
Like it or not, "Freedom isn't free." Millions of people around the world have died for it.
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linazelle Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-12-06 06:37 PM
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5. You are right thousands have died for freedom but that's not in Iraq
And that's why I have a problem with this. If anything, they are dying to remove our freedoms here in the US.
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rpannier Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-12-06 06:39 PM
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8. See, but I don't see that poem as an Iraq thing
I see it in more general terms: American Revolution, Civil War, WWII, etc.
I don't know your friend. Maybe she does see it in the context of Iraq.
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linazelle Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-12-06 06:42 PM
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10. I know what you are saying, and yet I believe that you cannot think
of war, in 2006 and not relate it first, to Iraq. In fact, this poem would have very little meaning if we were not in Iraq today IMHO.
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xchrom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-12-06 06:34 PM
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4. how do you tell some one WE are killing our troops?
iraq was no threat -- that tall, straight young man with the square cut hair -- was killed by his own people -- the country we invaded was no threat.
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linazelle Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-12-06 06:38 PM
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6. I know, I don't want to be to hard-hitting which is why I asked for input
The truth is ugly. Most people--these people aren't "up" on the web of lies that have placed us at war. I don't know how to break it gently. :shrug:
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xchrom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-12-06 06:40 PM
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9. you are a better person than me and are to be commended for your patience.
i mean that -- good on ya.
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livvy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-12-06 06:38 PM
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7. I like it.
It's sincere and truthful without being harsh or judgmental. It sounds like it is coming from your heart, without any tinge of political bent.
I bet that was your intent. If so, I think you have succeeded. Nicely done.
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linazelle Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-12-06 06:54 PM
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14. Thanks--especially for the input about it being apolitical. Very
important that that came across as I was definitely biting my tongue.
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Kutjara Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-12-06 06:49 PM
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11. It always seems that poems like this one...
...are written in the sing-song meter of nursery rhymes. It's as if 3,000 years of Western literary tradition simply doesn't exist. The Hallmark-card style "de de de de dum de de/de de de de de de" rubbish is as infantile as the thoughts it expresses. Unfortunately, it speaks volumes about the ability of the composer and his/her intended audience to comprehend arguments that are not similarly chopped, pureed and strained. The people you want to write to are capable of digesting mental baby food. Unfortunately, the letter you have written is steak. They can't digest it.

This is not a criticism of your letter, I think it is excellent. I just don't think that it will penetrate the mush minds of the people you want to reach. They tend to respond better to stereotypical appeals to their emotions than reasoned argument. They don't get subtle and they don't get irony. They are so enamored of the status quo and afraid of change that the very idea you might be attacking their 'sacred cows' (the President, for example) will snap their minds shut. They don't watch the news or read the papers, so talk of WMDs and Jennings Brewster will zoom over their heads faster than a wing of FA-18s.

Perhaps the only way to combat the saccharin-sweet, sentimental drivel in the poem is to fight fire with fire and write something similar yourself. Leave out the facts and go straight for the "forgotten soldier dying in the desert night, abandoned by his country" appeal to the emotions.

If you read some of the most effective World War I poetry (Wilfred Owen, Rupert Brook, Sigfried Sassoon), they didn't lay out the facts of Britain's mismanagement of the war. They wrote things like "a corner of some forgotten field/that is forever England".

Half the battle in communication is speaking the language of those with whom you speak. If they write nursery rhymes to you, write nursery rhymes back.

Just my two cents. Knock 'em dead!
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linazelle Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-12-06 06:51 PM
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13. And your response is steak--good thing I have an iron stomach
Thanks for the great feedback. I have sent the response already but I will work on some dessert to follow it up with later. :hi:
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JuniperLea Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-12-06 06:49 PM
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12. Well done!
Spoken like a TRUE patriot.

Email like the one you received sure do get around. I received the same one a while back and now I wish I'd had the patience you've shown here. Your response is filled with love and caring.
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linazelle Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-12-06 06:55 PM
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15. I appreciate hearing that the heartfelt sentiment comes through
You can't go too wrong when speaking from the heart. :hi:
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JuniperLea Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-12-06 07:06 PM
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16. Let us know how it is received
I can't see anyone being the slightest bit offended by this.
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