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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-19-10 06:48 PM
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My poem: Leave Open The Door
Loves
a topsy turvy mess
that will change where your life was going before
you left open
that door



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Haole Girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Oct-21-10 08:05 PM
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1. I like it..
just wish there was more of it. :hi:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Oct-21-10 08:10 PM
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2. My dear Haole Girl!
Well, it was longer, but not better!

I actually improved it by cutting.

Glad you enjoyed what there is anyway!

:hi:
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WCGreen Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Oct-22-10 06:13 AM
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3. sometimes the knife is mightier than the pen....
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Oct-22-10 12:02 PM
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4. Indeed, that certainly can be true...
And this time it was!

Hey Chris...

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Scottybeamer70 Donating Member (844 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-22-11 03:23 PM
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5. Good one CaliforniaPeggy
Guess I should have posted my poem in this forum......just didn't know it was here!
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-22-11 07:20 PM
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6. My dear Scottybeamer70!
Welcome to the Writing Group!

I was very pleasantly surprised at your coming by and commenting...

There's a lot of quiet forums/groups on DU.

And I'm glad you enjoyed my little work.

:hi:
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Scottybeamer70 Donating Member (844 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-22-11 09:24 PM
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7. Thank you, Peggy
This might turn out to be my favorite place. I really do get tired of all the
arguing and name calling that goes on in the news groups. It gets pretty old,
and I really was thinking of just getting out of DU altogether. Maybe I'll
stay a little longer.
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