Night Street

[CaliforniaPeggy]

smooth black

empty

dark


I am alone
gregorian
chant
in solitude

earth turning
over


I see

only darkness



© 2010 MLC

[demtenjeep]

1. Mrs. California Peggy

you continue to put out great stuff.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

2. My dear demtenjeep...

I'm glad you think so!

Thank you so much...

[NYC_SKP]

3. Evocative...

Somber, without being dark.

Almost restful...

:hug:

Makes me want to dig up some Gregorian chants and go to bed to dream...

[CaliforniaPeggy]

4. My dear NYC_SKP...

It was very dark on the way home last night from the open mic...

And that triggered this...

Thanks, sweetie...

:hug:

[MiddleFingerMom]

5. My Dear CaliforniaPeggy...

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... EXCELLENT -- once again.
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If I hadn't been logged in to DU, I might've had to -- the feeling
of isolation was so strongly and viscerally conveyed with this one.
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I saw your mention of the inspiration. I hope that was it and that
it was transitory. Still feeling that dark... then PM me about it,
please?
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To get over that poem, I have to go fix myself a bowl of chocolate
ice cream -- MAYBE even need some Hershey's syrup to come up
from this one.
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P-s-s-s-s-t.
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Thanks for that rationalization.
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[CaliforniaPeggy]

6. My dear MiddleFingerMom!

Ah, I'm always good for rationalizations, sweetie!

And thank you for all your good comments...

Glad you enjoyed!

And not to worry....the darkness was very transitory...

:hug: