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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts)  Journal Click to send private message to this author Click to view this author's profile Click to add this author to your buddy list Click to add this author to your Ignore list Donate to DU! Thu Oct-08-09 09:50 PM
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My newest poem, from my workshop: Updated at 9:21 PM
“Rainy”

Words in

                 Drops


                   I want to read

                                 But


                                     Down the
                                Glass

                               they go

                                  Even.

                                    Rainy words

Any meaning?



                              Silence


                              Flows



                              down




© MLC
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   Different  seaker   Oct-08-09 10:12 PM   #1 
   My dear seaker!  CaliforniaPeggy   Oct-08-09 10:27 PM   #2 
      Kinda like building a sand castle before the surf hits.  Swede   Oct-08-09 10:38 PM   #3 
         You could say that, my dear Swede...  CaliforniaPeggy   Oct-08-09 10:40 PM   #4 
   Very nice Peg...  LeftyFingerPop   Oct-08-09 11:05 PM   #5 
   My dear LeftyFingerPop!  CaliforniaPeggy   Oct-08-09 11:18 PM   #6 
      Yep...I can read something that interests me over and over...  LeftyFingerPop   Oct-08-09 11:20 PM   #7 
   Lovely, and evocative...  NYC_SKP   Oct-09-09 01:15 AM   #8 
   My dear NYC_SKP!  CaliforniaPeggy   Oct-09-09 01:18 AM   #9 
   Thank you.  asdjrocky   Oct-09-09 01:22 AM   #10 
   You're welcome, my dear asdjrocky...  CaliforniaPeggy   Oct-09-09 01:28 AM   #11 
   really nice, especially the 3 words that end it  abq e streeter   Oct-09-09 02:03 AM   #12 
   My dear abq e streeter...  CaliforniaPeggy   Oct-09-09 02:07 AM   #13 
   Thank you for still sharing your poems  Haole Girl   Oct-09-09 08:08 AM   #14 
   My dear Haole Girl!  CaliforniaPeggy   Oct-09-09 09:03 AM   #15 
   Oh, I love it! I can even  Pool Hall Ace   Oct-09-09 02:36 PM   #16 
      My dear Pool Hall Ace!  CaliforniaPeggy   Oct-09-09 04:04 PM   #17 
 
seaker Donating Member (655 posts) Click to send private message to this author Click to add this author to your buddy list Click to add this author to your Ignore list Thu Oct-08-09 10:12 PM
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1. Different
I like it and applaud your exploration and growth... :applause: :applause: :applause:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts)  Journal Click to send private message to this author Click to view this author's profile Click to add this author to your buddy list Click to add this author to your Ignore list Donate to DU! Thu Oct-08-09 10:27 PM
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2. My dear seaker! Updated at 9:21 PM
I'm glad you do!

The assignment was to write on any surface...So I chose a rainy window where the words would be washed away by the drops.

Thank you, sweetie!

:hug:
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Swede Donating Member (1000+ posts)  Journal Click to send private message to this author Click to view this author's profile Click to add this author to your buddy list Click to add this author to your Ignore list Thu Oct-08-09 10:38 PM
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3. Kinda like building a sand castle before the surf hits.
:toast:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts)  Journal Click to send private message to this author Click to view this author's profile Click to add this author to your buddy list Click to add this author to your Ignore list Donate to DU! Thu Oct-08-09 10:40 PM
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4. You could say that, my dear Swede... Updated at 9:21 PM
:toast:

:D
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LeftyFingerPop Donating Member (1000+ posts) Click to send private message to this author Click to view this author's profile Click to add this author to your buddy list Click to add this author to your Ignore list Thu Oct-08-09 11:05 PM
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5. Very nice Peg...
I've been compelled to read it about 10 times...I like it... :hi:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts)  Journal Click to send private message to this author Click to view this author's profile Click to add this author to your buddy list Click to add this author to your Ignore list Donate to DU! Thu Oct-08-09 11:18 PM
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6. My dear LeftyFingerPop! Updated at 9:21 PM
TEN times? Wow!

I'm so pleased you like it!

It is highly experimental...

Thanks, sweetie...

:hug:
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LeftyFingerPop Donating Member (1000+ posts) Click to send private message to this author Click to view this author's profile Click to add this author to your buddy list Click to add this author to your Ignore list Thu Oct-08-09 11:20 PM
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7. Yep...I can read something that interests me over and over...
To absorb it...you know what I mean. :hug:
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NYC_SKP Donating Member (1000+ posts)  Journal Click to send private message to this author Click to view this author's profile Click to add this author to your buddy list Click to add this author to your Ignore list Donate to DU! Fri Oct-09-09 01:15 AM
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8. Lovely, and evocative...
evocative of the rainy days coming, and the way thoughts and feelings sort of melt and run and, well, you know.

Wow!

:hug:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts)  Journal Click to send private message to this author Click to view this author's profile Click to add this author to your buddy list Click to add this author to your Ignore list Donate to DU! Fri Oct-09-09 01:18 AM
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9. My dear NYC_SKP! Updated at 9:21 PM
So pleased you like this!

I wrote it Tuesday night after coming home from the workshop...I was on fire!

The assignment was to write on a surface ...any surface.

You should have seen me struggling today with HTML, for the spacing! NOT fun, lol!

Thanks, sweetie...

:hug:
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asdjrocky (1000+ posts)  Journal Click to send private message to this author Click to view this author's profile Click to add this author to your buddy list Click to add this author to your Ignore list Fri Oct-09-09 01:22 AM
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10. Thank you.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts)  Journal Click to send private message to this author Click to view this author's profile Click to add this author to your buddy list Click to add this author to your Ignore list Donate to DU! Fri Oct-09-09 01:28 AM
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11. You're welcome, my dear asdjrocky...Updated at 9:21 PM
And I thank you...

:hug:
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abq e streeter Donating Member (1000+ posts)  Journal Click to send private message to this author Click to view this author's profile Click to add this author to your buddy list Click to add this author to your Ignore list Fri Oct-09-09 02:03 AM
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12. really nice, especially the 3 words that end it
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts)  Journal Click to send private message to this author Click to view this author's profile Click to add this author to your buddy list Click to add this author to your Ignore list Donate to DU! Fri Oct-09-09 02:07 AM
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13. My dear abq e streeter...Updated at 9:21 PM
I wanted to give the impression of water washing the words off the window, as the rain streaked down.

Thank you!
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Haole Girl Donating Member (1000+ posts)  Journal Click to send private message to this author Click to add this author to your buddy list Click to add this author to your Ignore list Donate to DU! Fri Oct-09-09 08:08 AM
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14. Thank you for still sharing your poems
:-)
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts)  Journal Click to send private message to this author Click to view this author's profile Click to add this author to your buddy list Click to add this author to your Ignore list Donate to DU! Fri Oct-09-09 09:03 AM
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15. My dear Haole Girl!Updated at 9:21 PM
You're welcome, sweetie!

I always will...

;-)
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Pool Hall Ace Donating Member (1000+ posts) Click to send private message to this author Click to view this author's profile Click to add this author to your buddy list Click to add this author to your Ignore list Fri Oct-09-09 02:36 PM
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16. Oh, I love it! I can even
hear the squeak squeak squeak of you writing the words as I am reading them! :D
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts)  Journal Click to send private message to this author Click to view this author's profile Click to add this author to your buddy list Click to add this author to your Ignore list Donate to DU! Fri Oct-09-09 04:04 PM
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17. My dear Pool Hall Ace!Updated at 9:21 PM
Wow! This is the thing about poetry...

I can write something, and everyone can see totally different things than I did...

And that's wonderful!

I'm so glad you enjoyed this...

Thank you, sweetie...

:hug:
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