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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts)  Journal Click to send private message to this author Click to view this author's profile Click to add this author to your buddy list Click to add this author to your Ignore list Donate to DU! Sun Sep-27-09 12:35 AM
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My poem "The Song" complete with audio...
Edited on Sun Sep-27-09 12:38 AM by CaliforniaPeggy
http://www.fileden.com/files/2009/9/14/2574424/MP3-The%...

Come and have a listen!


:hi:


Oops, I forgot the lyrics... :blush:


You bend over your guitar
Plucking, strumming
Making the music of dreams
Bending over the woman
Making her dream
Making her moan
As you play
As your fingers move
Within her rhythms
As she moves in time
To your finger’s
Touch

The melodies are tender
Promising
As you strum
Her hair falls over your hands
She delights you
With her song
Sung from her heart
As you strum
her

© MLC
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   Another wondrous poem....  Dystopian   Sep-27-09 01:30 AM   #1 
   My dear Dystopian!  CaliforniaPeggy   Sep-27-09 01:33 AM   #2 
   Oh, dear!  NYC_SKP   Sep-27-09 11:31 AM   #3 
   My dear NYC_SKP!  CaliforniaPeggy   Sep-27-09 12:10 PM   #4 
   Thank you Peggy  Haole Girl   Sep-27-09 12:19 PM   #5 
   My dear Haole Girl!  CaliforniaPeggy   Sep-27-09 12:26 PM   #6 
   Locking.  Danger MouseDU Moderator   Sep-27-09 05:48 PM   #7 
 
Dystopian Donating Member (1000+ posts) Click to send private message to this author Click to view this author's profile Click to add this author to your buddy list Click to add this author to your Ignore list Sun Sep-27-09 01:30 AM
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1. Another wondrous poem....
Thank you, Peggy :hug:
It's awesome having the audio...and I love the fact that it's continuous...
Seems like forever that you've been touching my heart with your goodness...
And the poetry in your heart is a treasured gift...
For me, this poem was magical....intense.
:loveya:
peace~
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts)  Journal Click to send private message to this author Click to view this author's profile Click to add this author to your buddy list Click to add this author to your Ignore list Donate to DU! Sun Sep-27-09 01:33 AM
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2. My dear Dystopian!
Wow, sweetie!

I am overwhelmed at your praise...

I just let out the words as they appear...well, mostly...

I'm so pleased that this touched you so deeply, sweetie...

Thank you!

:loveya:

:hug:
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NYC_SKP Donating Member (1000+ posts)  Journal Click to send private message to this author Click to view this author's profile Click to add this author to your buddy list Click to add this author to your Ignore list Donate to DU! Sun Sep-27-09 11:31 AM
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3. Oh, dear!
I may need a cold shower!

Thanks, CaliforniaPeggy!

:hug:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts)  Journal Click to send private message to this author Click to view this author's profile Click to add this author to your buddy list Click to add this author to your Ignore list Donate to DU! Sun Sep-27-09 12:10 PM
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4. My dear NYC_SKP!
Glad you enjoyed it, sweetie...

Enjoy your cold shower too... :evilgrin:

Thanks!

:hug:

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Haole Girl Donating Member (1000+ posts)  Journal Click to send private message to this author Click to add this author to your buddy list Click to add this author to your Ignore list Donate to DU! Sun Sep-27-09 12:19 PM
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5. Thank you Peggy
I would comment further, but I don't want to get your thread locked. :evilgrin:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts)  Journal Click to send private message to this author Click to view this author's profile Click to add this author to your buddy list Click to add this author to your Ignore list Donate to DU! Sun Sep-27-09 12:26 PM
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6. My dear Haole Girl!
Well now, we can't have that!

Thanks for coming by and commenting, sweetie!

Glad you enjoyed it... :evilgrin:

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Danger Mouse DU Moderator Donating Member (1000+ posts)  Journal Click to send private message to this author Click to view this author's profile Click to add this author to your buddy list Click to add this author to your Ignore list Sun Sep-27-09 05:48 PM
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7. Locking.
Poems of an erotic nature should be posted in the poetry group or the writing group. If they are posted here, they will be locked.

Thank you for understanding.
Danger Mouse
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