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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-09-09 07:42 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Mon 2/9/2009)
The Devil's in the Details

The marsh creaks back and forth
outside the window. My wife
waits upstairs in our bed. Books

build slowly along the living room
walls, hallways, up the stairs
until my wife is reading wildly,

hair flying. The moon strips needs,
turns this way and that
in the water, one lifetime after another,

silk of the slow currents invisible
by daylight. We cannot
resist any longer. My wife and I

room after room, tumbling books
from the shelves, turning
the pages, breathing faster and faster.

James Doyle

************

:hi:

RL
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blueraven95 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-09-09 08:06 AM
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1. morning!
:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-09-09 08:09 AM
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2. Good Morning!
:hi:

RL
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Chorophyll Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-09-09 09:09 AM
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3. Wow, that gave me a head-rush!
:) :hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-09-09 06:50 PM
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7. Book Lust!
:hi:

RL
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-09-09 09:12 AM
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4. hmmmm...
Edited on Mon Feb-09-09 09:13 AM by Tuesday Afternoon
I don't know.
This one is a weird for me and I don't like the way it sounds out loud.
Too many words that end in "s". I like the way it ends though. :donut:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-09-09 06:50 PM
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8. ...
:hi:

RL
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-09-09 09:14 AM
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5. Hee; I love it. I, too, am devouring books lately.
And it's great.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-09-09 06:51 PM
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9. Yeah, I'm flying thru my novels I saved from the store.
a book or 2 a week.

:hi:

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-09-09 12:19 PM
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6. My dear Retro!
Hmmm...Interesting...

Books as ...what? Sex?

I like it!

Thank you...

:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Feb-09-09 06:51 PM
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10. ...
:hi:

RL
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