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bertha katzenengel Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-19-08 08:57 AM
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Write a short poem that describes you or something about you.
Mine:

I'm the one with crazy hair
If you see me don't be scared
A hat will cover soon my head
And will remain until I'm dead.

Yours?
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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-19-08 09:12 AM
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1. k
Edited on Thu Jun-19-08 09:19 AM by GoPsUx
My real name is James S
And if I had to guess
What others might think of me?
I say let them think,whatever they wish
whatever that opinion might be.
For those who care,
and always are there
Know that I am real and true.
To others I am who they think I am, and this is what I do.

(Hey I pulled it out of my ass) LOL :rofl:




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bertha katzenengel Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-19-08 09:14 AM
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2. very, very nice
:yourock:

Thank you!
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Guava Jelly Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-19-08 09:15 AM
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3. :o)
Your welcome :hi:
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bertha katzenengel Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-19-08 04:08 PM
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4. kick for the crowd getting home on the east coast
:kick:
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RadiationTherapy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-19-08 04:15 PM
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5. There once was a man from nantucket,
nawww. that's too easy.

Personality.
Barely a person at all.
Please don't touch me there.

haiku-2008
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-19-08 04:33 PM
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6. Hi, Bertha! This is me, sometimes:
Edited on Thu Jun-19-08 04:34 PM by CaliforniaPeggy
The poetry’s inside me

It’s out of reach


It’s like a brick well

Where I cannot see the bottom

I feel the words faintly stirring there

In the watery blackness

How do I reach them?


Other poets will show me the way...

Their ideas will fill my well

I will metamorphose

Them into being mine


Perhaps one day

I will know how.
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tigereye Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-19-08 05:34 PM
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12. your imagery gets more and more concrete and thoughtful
I like it!



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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-19-08 07:25 PM
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16. Thank you, my dear tigereye...
:hug:
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Parche Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-19-08 05:12 PM
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7. Poem
Roses are red
violets are blue
I am a stud
How about you?
:woohoo: :hi:
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Z_I_Peevey Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-19-08 05:16 PM
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8. Peevey
Redneck mama, Choctaw gal,
Cast-iron skillets, no T-Fal,
Grass too high and truck unwashed,
Lost at love, must be star-crossed.

Rabble-rouser, motel maid,
Beer bar singer, unafraid
Of lists and camps and fascist fools,
Okie like Woody through and through.

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My Good Babushka Donating Member (966 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-19-08 08:31 PM
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18. This, I like
No T-Fal!
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pink-o Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-19-08 05:22 PM
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9. Here ya go
Born in the Fall
Grew to 6 feet tall
Fine for a boy
But did not bring a girl joy

Now I don't care
Cuz it's good for a scare
But tho I try to be defiant
I'm really just a gentle giant.

:hi:
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trackfan Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-19-08 05:32 PM
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10. I wrote this in 1996, but it still holds true:
One O'clock

How can it be? The
day's but half over.
Looking around, I've
nothing to do but
practice my acting
skills, as I sit and
try to perfect the
delicate art of
making it look like
I'm working hard. The
clock on the wall shows
how little time has
fled since I've started.
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tigereye Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-19-08 05:33 PM
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11. ok
Edited on Thu Jun-19-08 05:35 PM by tigereye
soon to be fifty
silver haired still wild at heart
garden my delight



:hi: Bertha!
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Chan790 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-19-08 06:06 PM
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13. Discovery: It's hard to write a poem about you when your head is full of emo lyrics.
(^^^that was a title.)

I'm sitting here, put pen to paper
the first time in months, words work
wrapping themselves around white pages
Nothing seems relevent for a topic:

I got a haircut, it's not new.
I might have a roommate,
but not if
I can't find a new job.
I might have a girlfriend but
I'm not sure I want her,
she scares me. You can't fuck up like
I fuck up a lot
and keep someone interested
unless she's crazy.
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My Good Babushka Donating Member (966 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-19-08 08:32 PM
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19. It's like you're channeling
Bukowski. awesome.
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MrScorpio Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-19-08 06:11 PM
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14. MrScorpio...
Dope!

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femmocrat Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-19-08 06:16 PM
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15. I'm no poet,
and I know it.
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My Good Babushka Donating Member (966 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-19-08 08:25 PM
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17. Here is one from a few months ago.
By the feeble lamp that sloshes dishwater gray light into the murky room, I am handstitching something.
I spool out every memory of a kiss, and all the lusts with their worn out faces,
and the shape of all the fingers that have traced me on a mattress.
I make bad seams. It is already rent. I keep my needle busy.
I touch. I was touched. Make me warm.
When I'm done I shake off the loose threads.
All I have when I'm done, a waxy brown butcher's paper around a small wooden bird.
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KitchenWitch Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-19-08 08:35 PM
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20. ...
Sweat, Sweat, Sweat
All I do is Sweat
I sit still, I sweat
I move, I sweat
I think, I sweat
I breathe, I sweat
I am so freaking wet
All I do is sweat
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