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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-20-08 08:41 AM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 4/20/08
"The Tree of Unknowing"

Uncertainty, take me into the forest
leaf by leaf—

where an immigrant sits in a Jersey slum,
a young mother rocking her child.

Where, along the endless road, are you going away from me like a cloud?
Like a cloud, like a cloud?


I lay in your arms, watching your lips.
I touched your chin with my tiny fingers.

Your loneliness sang to me,
each word a crumb of light, burning in the skull—

until a galaxy of sparks flashed among the branches,
lighting the way where?

I lifted my head. What was it I saw
in your gaze, the maze

of you: corridors of years, corridors of war, black wheat-hair ripening—
the last shape sown in closing eyes.

The words have their own woods.
Where the words can't go further: where the woods begin

that make us mad, too real and not
real enough. Whose memory was it? Why did I feel such joy?

Look, the cloud-tree will never die—

I wonder who you were: I wonder
because you were.

—Suji Kwock Kim
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-20-08 01:32 PM
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1. Kick.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-21-08 12:27 AM
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2. Kick.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-21-08 12:31 AM
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3. My dear BlueIris!
Well, I don't get it...

But I still like it!

Thank you...

:hi:
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-21-08 12:36 AM
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4. I think it's just a speaker reminiscing about ancestors, literal and figurative.
Edited on Mon Apr-21-08 12:44 AM by BlueIris
I read it as a poem about the marginalization and oppression of immigrant/refuge culture, history and stories.
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