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Adams Wulff Donating Member (658 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Apr-11-08 03:05 PM
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I'll show you mine if you show me yours!
Reminder- Deadline for A Prairie Home Companion's 'Bed of Roses' Contest

Is midnight tonight!

I submitted just 10 minutes ago after 2 weeks of deliberation.
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nuxvomica Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Apr-11-08 05:35 PM
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1. Shoot! I got nothing.
I've written sonnets before but I was putting this one off. I must see if I can throw one together.
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Adams Wulff Donating Member (658 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Apr-12-08 07:51 PM
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2. I didn't win
Not even a finalist.

But here is my submission anyway.

Once in a Lifetime

David Adams


It happens but once in a lifetime
Love springs its boundless energies in your direction.
The warmth is naturally sublime
guiding you to a life so close to perfection.

Suddenly you meet one who makes you whole
filling you with what ought to be
Pleasing your body, rapturing your soul
awash in love, your mind set free.

The ballet of love, a demanding sense of grace
dancing to the music of life's reprise
The music picks up, and a smile crosses your face
you are so happy, and this is my prize

At last, a reward worth the cost
No longer sad, no longer lost.
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The Straight Story Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Apr-12-08 08:14 PM
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3. Reminds me of my wife
Nicely done btw
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Adams Wulff Donating Member (658 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Apr-12-08 08:22 PM
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4. ty!
they are having another contest next year, let's get crackin'!
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suninvited Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Apr-12-08 08:23 PM
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5. If I were the judge
you would have won, hands down
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Adams Wulff Donating Member (658 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 02:57 AM
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6. That is so sweet!
Thank you! There were 4,053 entries, a staggering number, if you ask me, and some were just awesome!
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nuxvomica Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-13-08 09:39 AM
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7. That's a beautiful sonnet
I see you went with the English instead of the Italian format -- good choice. I had started one after your post but then had to answer a trouble call from work that turned out to be a false alarm so I never finished it. Maybe next year.
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