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LeftyFingerPop Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Nov-28-07 07:45 PM
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From my very soul, a Philboy original poem
I've never done a poem before
So this will probably suck
A house is built with toil and sweat
And Donald is a duck

Mary had a little lamb
Timmy fell in the well
Will Lassie summon help for him?
Only time will tell

I gave my love a cherry
And it had no stone
I walked naked in a blizzard
And it froze me to the bone

Never do today
What can be put off until tomorrow
Keep your ammunition dry
Don't wallow in your sorrow

Pull the rabbit from a hat
Kiss him on the nose
Paint him pink and pat his head
And offer him a rose

On a corner in New York City
"Hey buddy....wanna buy a watch"
I bought three and sold him back six
And chalked up another notch

Violets are yellow, the moon is made of cheese
Sunshine evaporates the dew
For all you lurking Freeper types
Here's a big "fuck you".
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  - I don't give a shit about your poem......  lost-in-nj   Nov-28-07 07:52 PM   #1 
  - Nice to see you!!  philboy   Nov-28-07 07:57 PM   #3 
  - Excellent  frogmarch   Nov-28-07 07:53 PM   #2 
  - I was thinking maybe...  philboy   Nov-28-07 08:22 PM   #7 
  - From your soul? So, is it okay that it made me laugh?  txwhitedove   Nov-28-07 08:02 PM   #4 
  - Well, it wasn't really from my soul...  philboy   Nov-28-07 08:23 PM   #8 
  - Pure genius  Perseid   Nov-28-07 08:02 PM   #5 
  - Alas...  philboy   Nov-28-07 08:24 PM   #10 
  - Bravo!  Peake   Nov-28-07 08:11 PM   #6 
  - ...  philboy   Nov-28-07 08:26 PM   #11 
  - Philboy you never cease to amaze me with the  Southpawkicker   Nov-28-07 08:24 PM   #9 
  - Coming from you...  philboy   Nov-28-07 08:28 PM   #12 
  - I think you misspelled "soul."  DuStrange   Nov-28-07 09:40 PM   #13 
  - Ok ok....  philboy   Nov-28-07 10:20 PM   #15 
  - Love it!  KitchenWitch   Nov-28-07 09:43 PM   #14 
  - Thank you!  philboy   Nov-28-07 10:21 PM   #16 
  - A literary genius...  Engi   Nov-29-07 07:59 PM   #17 
     - ...  philboy   Nov-29-07 08:08 PM   #18 
     - Hey PEV  Southpawkicker   Nov-29-07 08:08 PM   #19 
        - I'm a pev... you're a pev  Engi   Nov-29-07 08:11 PM   #20 
           - exactly  Southpawkicker   Nov-29-07 08:13 PM   #21 
              - yep! we are family :)  Engi   Nov-29-07 08:20 PM   #22 
 
lost-in-nj Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Nov-28-07 07:52 PM
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1. I don't give a shit about your poem......
:hug: :hug: :hug: :hug: :hug: :hug: :hug: :hug: :hug:

thats what I care about!!!!!!!


nice to see you.......

:)


lost
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LeftyFingerPop Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Nov-28-07 07:57 PM
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3. Nice to see you!!
:hug: :hug: :hi:
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frogmarch Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Nov-28-07 07:53 PM
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2. Excellent
And it's begging to be set to music, don't you think?
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LeftyFingerPop Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Nov-28-07 08:22 PM
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7. I was thinking maybe...
"Smoke on The Water" by Deep Purple?
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txwhitedove Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Nov-28-07 08:02 PM
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4. From your soul? So, is it okay that it made me laugh?
:D
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LeftyFingerPop Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Nov-28-07 08:23 PM
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8. Well, it wasn't really from my soul...
it was from one of the voices in my head.
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Perseid Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Nov-28-07 08:02 PM
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5. Pure genius
Edited on Wed Nov-28-07 08:31 PM by Perseid
one hopes you're not a one hit wonder!
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LeftyFingerPop Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Nov-28-07 08:24 PM
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10. Alas...
I'm afraid I probably am! :rofl: And thank you. :hi:
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Fire Walk With Me Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Nov-28-07 08:11 PM
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6. Bravo!
I especially like that you didn't have to resort to referencing anyone else's work! :applause: :rofl:
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LeftyFingerPop Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Nov-28-07 08:26 PM
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11. ...
:thumbsup: :rofl:
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SPKrazy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Nov-28-07 08:24 PM
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9. Philboy you never cease to amaze me with the
energy that comes out in your posts

the insanity that emanates from them

and the fucking funny as hell way that you are buddy!!!!

:loveya:

:hug: :hug:
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LeftyFingerPop Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Nov-28-07 08:28 PM
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12. Coming from you...
that means a lot...it truly does, and thank you. :hug: :loveya:
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Dr. Strange Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Nov-28-07 09:40 PM
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13. I think you misspelled "soul."
Even though this won't end up on the greatest page, I'm recommending it, 'cause it rocks!

By the way, what's a "Freeper?"
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LeftyFingerPop Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Nov-28-07 10:20 PM
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15. Ok ok....
my "sole"! Thanks for the recommend! :thumbsup:
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KitchenWitch Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Nov-28-07 09:43 PM
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14. Love it!
:hi:

How are you these days?
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LeftyFingerPop Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Nov-28-07 10:21 PM
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16. Thank you!
:hi: I'm very good thank you KW, and I hope you are well!
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S n o w b a l l Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-29-07 07:59 PM
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17. A literary genius...
...is such an aphrodisiac. <swooooon>

:loveya: :loveya:
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LeftyFingerPop Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-29-07 08:08 PM
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18. ...
:blush: :loveya: :loveya:
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SPKrazy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-29-07 08:08 PM
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19. Hey PEV
:hi:

:hug:

:loveya:
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S n o w b a l l Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-29-07 08:11 PM
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20. I'm a pev... you're a pev
:P

:hug: :hi:

:loveya:
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SPKrazy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-29-07 08:13 PM
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21. exactly
it takes one to know one of course

how are ya?

:hug: :hug:
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S n o w b a l l Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-29-07 08:20 PM
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22. yep! we are family :)
I'm good! busy! New job in teevee, never boring. :)

Hope you're doing good! :hug:

:loveya:
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