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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 12:12 AM
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A poem for those among us who suffer...
I was just thinking about my friends who have overwhelming disabilities...

And these words came churning up out of me...

As did my tears...


For all who hurt

And are not healed...

For all who labor to breathe

For all who struggle to walk

For all who have overwhelming pain

Or illness...

Oh god hear me

Make them whole and well and strong


Let the universe show

They are not alone in their struggle

That as long as we draw breath

We will be alongside them

They will have our love

And our overwhelming ache

That they be well, forever!


:grouphug:
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KitchenWitch Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 12:13 AM
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1. ...
:cry:

I am so touched by this.

:hug:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 12:17 AM
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3. Thank you, my dear KW...
You were one of those I was thinking of...

And you know some of the others...

Thank you, sweetie...:hug:

My best work seems to come at moments of high emotion...
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JeffR Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 12:16 AM
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2. This cuts to the quick tonight, Peggy
This is where poetry and prayer meet.

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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 12:19 AM
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4. My dear JeffR...
Thank you...

That's how it felt to me too...

I did one little edit...

The rest is how it came out of me...

:hug:
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JeffR Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 12:20 AM
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6. You're a great soul
:hug:

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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 12:36 AM
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8. "...where poetry and prayer meet."
you took the words right off my key board:D

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SeattleGirl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 12:19 AM
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5. God, Peggy, that brought tears to my eyes.
And it made me think of my mother, who is, thankfully, improving some.

And our overwhelming ache
That they be well, forever!

Oh, how much I want that for her.

:hug:

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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 12:21 AM
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7. My dear SeattleGirl...
Thank you, sweetie...

I am happy that your mom is improving!

You know who I'm thinking of...

:hug:
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 12:38 AM
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9. very spiritual and soulful.
hopeful and uplifting.

nicely done :)
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 12:42 AM
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10. My dear Tuesday Afternoon...
Thank you, sweetie...

I never cease to be amazed at what churns up out of me...

:hug:
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libnnc Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 12:44 AM
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11. That's so beautiful Peggy
There are many people who are dear to me who are in great physical pain right now.

I can read your poem and send those wonderful thoughts their way. :grouphug:

Thank you so much. :hug:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 12:50 AM
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12. My dear libnnc...
Thank you for your very kind words, sweetie...

I'm so grateful that I am able to write this way...

And that I am allowed to help all those who need it, even if only psychologically... :hug:
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Mr_Jefferson_24 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 12:56 AM
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13. Very moving, Peggy -- Hope you have a great Thanksgiving Day. nt.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 01:01 AM
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14. My dear Mr_Jefferson_24...
Thank you so much...

I will be having a lovely Thanksgiving...

And I wish the same for you...:hug:
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Zephyrbird Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 01:36 AM
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15. I swear this is true.
I was hurting so badly because of the fibromyalgia that I wasn't going to come here tonite. But I needed a lift, and here was the first thread I opened!!!!

You know Peggy, so much of our lives we wonder if we've ever made a difference. Would the world miss us if we weren't here...?

But I tell you what, tonite you made the difference for me. Don't ever let me catch you questioning your self-worth. I'm sure lots of folks from here especially owe you a debt for being the supportive, loving person I see every day in you.

Thanks a big bunch of sunflowers!!

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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 01:46 AM
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16. My dear Zephyrbird...
Oh my god...your beautiful words have brought the sting of tears to my eyes...

I am exceedingly honored that I was able to help you tonight...

I do occasionally question my self-worth, until I remember responses like yours...

I have many close friends here who have expressed their gratitude at my support...

I am so grateful that I can help in any way at all...

Thank you, sweetie...

:hug:
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UrbScotty Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 02:03 AM
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17. Oh, my dear CaliforniaPeggy...
Edited on Thu Nov-22-07 02:04 AM by ih8thegop
Did you write that?

It's so... beautiful.

There are other words I could probably use to describe it, if I could think of them.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 02:04 AM
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18. My dear ih8thegop...
Yes, sweetie...I did...

Just before the time I posted it...

Thank you...

:hug:
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flvegan Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 02:12 AM
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19. I like it.
Although not intended, I have to say that I think of this a different way, boltcutters and all.

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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 02:14 AM
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20. My dear flvegan...
I'm glad you like it, but I don't understand what you mean...Boltcutters?

Thank you!

:hug:
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flvegan Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 02:23 AM
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21. I love it, Peggy.
I don't want to detract from your prose by using it for my "agenda" so I'm just gonna shut up and appreciate your words from over here.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 02:26 AM
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22. OK....That's cool...
Why don't you PM me the answer to my question?

Cause I'd really like to know!

I'm glad you appreciate my prose... :hug:
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flvegan Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 02:38 AM
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23. Done!
I do really like this one. Quite a bit.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 02:43 AM
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24. Thank you so much!
And I have answered you...

Glad you like my poem...

:hug:
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Inchworm Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 02:58 AM
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25. This speaks to me Ms. Peggy
Thank you.

I love it!

:hug:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 03:03 AM
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26. My dear Inchworm!
I am so glad it speaks to you, sweetie!

I thank you...

It just came out of me tonight...all at once...

:hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 08:58 AM
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27. Thank you for this...
Prayer and Poetry meeting indeed...

:hug:

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 12:34 PM
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29. My dear Retro...
High praise from you indeed, sweetie...

Thank you...:hug:
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hippywife Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 08:59 AM
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28. Just beautiful, Peg.
You never know when something you say or write touches someone else profoundly as it did this morning. Much love to your kind heart this Thanksgiving morning.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 12:36 PM
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31. My dear hippywife...
I always hope that these more serious posts of mine will touch people...

I am honored when they do...

Thank you so much...

I'm hoping your Thanksgiving will be a beautiful one as well...:hug:
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SPKrazy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 12:36 PM
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30. lovely my California Dear Peggy
seriously

very nice

:hug: :loveya: :hug:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 12:39 PM
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32. My dear Southpawkicker!
Thank you so much, sweetie!

I'm glad you like this...


But

But

What are you doing with graywarrior's duck? :scared:



:loveya: :hug: :loveya:
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SPKrazy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 12:39 PM
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33. i stole it
for the day

or whatever

:rofl:

:evilgrin:

:hug: :hug:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 12:44 PM
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34. You are a bad, bad boy!
And you know what happens to them!

This: :spank: :spank:

:evilgrin:

:hug: :hug:

:rofl:
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SPKrazy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 12:44 PM
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35. maybe i like that
:evilgrin:

:rofl:


:hi:\
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Nov-22-07 12:46 PM
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36. You're not the only one...
:evilgrin:


:hug:
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