My bad poem:

[Mobius]

my bad poem:
desperate olive branch

I feel so desperate and fearful sometimes,
sometimes i want to puke my love handle and die,
the olive branch is so sexy and sad,
the blades of grass sound like ENRON .

I feel so desperate and fearful ,
nobody understands my ignorant , creepy pain ,
I want to run and hide in the rain
the olive branch reminds me of feeling fearful , the blades of grass mock my frugality ,

sometimes i want to puke my love handle and die,
underneath the sexy , lonely sky


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[Gimel]

1. I like your poem

It is sad. I don't understand it completely, but it sounds lonely, yet expression raises it above the total pits. A desperate olive branch. I like that.

[Rabbit of Caerbannog]

2. my bad poem:

Angry goat

I feel so Angry and giddy sometimes,
sometimes i want to incinerate my spleen and die,
the goat is so petulent and sad,
the rivers sound like Eros .

I feel so Angry and giddy ,
nobody understands my bonehead , glorious pain ,
I want to fly and dive in the rain
the goat reminds me of feeling giddy , the rivers mock my pain ,

sometimes i want to incinerate my spleen and die,
underneath the petulent , green sky