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Edited on Mon Aug-13-07 08:11 AM by GaYellowDawg
That is, if I could go back in time and deliver a few solid smacks upside Lucas's head.
Star Wars: Han shoots first in the digital remakes. That was perfectly in character for him! I don't know what the hell Lucas was thinking there.
Empire Strikes Back: Don't change a thing. Not. One. Thing. Except for cleaning up the special effects. I think I might have tweaked some of the stop action a little bit with morphing software to make it a hair smoother.
Return of the Jedi: Ewoks. I don't care what you do with them, make them more menacing. The Ewoks were the worst thing in the Star Wars universe until Jar Jar came along. No wonder the Empire fell if its elite troopers were beaten down by a bunch of rock and stick toting 3 foot high teddy bears. I wouldn't even care if Ewoks were substituted for by put-a-new-prosthetic-on-your-face-and-call-it-a-new-species Star Trek the Next Generation aliens. And while I'm talking aliens, Lando's copilot when he flew the Millenium Falcon was one goofy looking bastard.
Phantom Menace: Got a list.
1. Ditch the midichlorians, especially the part where the little guys made Anakin's mom pregnant. It reduced something mystical to an infection.
2. Do something different with the Trade Federation aliens. More convincing prosthetics and for gosh sakes, can the stupid accent.
3. No Jar Jar. Or if you gotta have him, don't make him the goofiest piece of crap in the universe. It would have been a lot cooler if he was some kind of con man who was clever and nasty and Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon had to keep an eye on him at the same time as everything else. And while you're at it, make his entire race look a little less stupid.
4. Make Anakin 13 or 14. That way, it makes more sense for him to be able to pilot things, it makes the romance with Amidala make sense instead of being sick, and it makes more sense for the Jedi Council to reject him as too old.
5. Oh yeah, Anakin's mom gets killed by a gangster who bet on one of Anakin's opponents in the pod race. The same gangster tries to go after Anakin but the Jedi kill him. Anakin, instead of leaving his mom in slavery, leaves because there's nothing left for him on Tatooine (and I think it'd make a neat parallel with Luke) and wants to be a hero like the men who killed his mother's killer.
6. Make the Trade Federation droids (all the different types) more menacing. They were goofy as hell.
7. I wouldn't have minded seeing Darth Maul raise a little more hell.
Attack of the Clones: Got another list.
1. Use someone besides Hayden Christianson.
2. If it's set 10 years after the first movie, then hell, use a different actress besides Natalie Portman. I'd go with Ashley Judd, whom I think would look a little like an older Natalie Portman.
3. Totally different plot: Here's where I would have wildly diverged from Lucas's plot. I would have made the whole clone army implanted with some sort of chip that ensured obedience. Then I would have made the Trade Federation get ahold of the army and attack Coruscant. During the attack, Anakin saves Padme's life (now Senator Padme) and she falls in love with him. The Galactic Republic undergoes massive losses and just in the nick of time, Senator Palpatine "discovers" a command frequency for the chip (having been allied with the Trade Federation the entire time in secret) and shuts the clone army down. The Trade Federation is defeated, but not before the Jedi "discover" that Count Dooku (and for gosh sakes, name the guy something different - you might as well call him Count Poop) is behind the whole clone army plot (of course, he's really in collusion with Palpatine). He defeats Obi Wan and Anakin, holds off Yoda, and escapes. In the meantime, with Yoda absent, Palpatine gets a no confidence vote for Chancellor "Kneel to Zod" and assumes the chancellorship. Then he whips the Senate into an absolute fear frenzy with fake intelligence about more clone armies and gets special powers (yeah, I know, sounds all too familiar). Anakin and Padme marry in secret.
Revenge of the Sith:
Another totally reworked plot. The movie opens a few months after the last movie. Before Anakin leaves on a mission to the far corners of the galaxy to try to track down Count **** (he wouldn't be named Dooku in my movie), Padme tells him she's pregnant. Anakin and Obi-Wan leave, only surprise! **** kidnaps Senator Padme (the chancellor wants her out of the way because she keeps on trying to return the Senate to power). Obi-Wan and Anakin are called back to go after her. During the rescue attempt, Padme gets free on her own, but is injured and goes into a coma. In the meantime, Anakin and Obi-Wan capture **** to take him back to Coruscant for trial. **** makes the mistake of gloating over Padme's injury in front of Anakin and Obi-Wan. Anakin goes completely crazy and executes **** in front of Obi-Wan. The Jedi Council, upon their return, take Padme into their care and interrogate Anakin. Once they find out that they married in secret, they oust Anakin from the Jedi for that and for the execution of **** as Padme's health fails. Obi-Wan protests and is sent to the lava planet to help mop up Trade Federation remnants. Anakin asks him to leave the Jedi with him but Obi-Wan refuses. Anakin, crazed with grief and rage, goes to Palpatine. As they talk, Palpatine gets a call: Padme and her baby are dead (of course, the Jedi manage to save both kids and hide them from Anakin). Anakin swears to kill all the Jedi in revenge, Palpatine reveals that he's a Sith, Anakin swears allegiance to him and becomes Vader. Vader and Palpatine lead the charge on the Jedi tower with clone troopers. Yoda escapes with the twins and takes them to Senator Organa. Anakin tells Vader that he will personally see to "the traitor Obi-Wan" and goes off to the lava planet, where he loses limbs and almost life. Obi-Wan meets up with Yoda and Organa, they split the twins up, and the movie ends much as it did with Vader looking at the Death Star.
On edit: Oh yeah, there's no goofy-assed "NOOOOOOOO!!!" Instead, when Vader comes up off the table, he says something like "my master, so long as this machine breathes for me, I shall pursue the Jedi and their allies to the far corners of the universe, for I have become Hate."
That's how you make the Star Wars movies better.
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