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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Mar-28-07 07:42 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Wed 3/28/2007)
San Francisco Night Windows

So hangs the hour like fruit fullblown and sweet,
Our strict and desperate avatar,
Despite that antique westward gulls lament
Over enormous waters which retreat
Weary unto the white and sensual star.
Accept these images for what they are--
Out of the past a fragile element
Of substance into accident.
I would speak honestly and of a full heart;
I would speak surely for the tale is short,
And the soul's remorseless catalogue
Assumes its quick and piteous sum.
Think you, hungry is the city in the fog
Where now the darkened piles resume
Their framed and frozen prayer
Articulate and shafted in the stone
Against the void and absolute air.
If so the frantic breath could be forgiven,
And the deep blood subdued before it is gone
In a savage paternoster to the stone,
Then might we all be shriven.

Robert Penn Warren

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RL

If you have a request for a certain Poet, post their name in the thread and I will find a poem by them and post it...

if you want to see some of my poetry, see the blog at:
http://www.myspace.com/retropaul

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BarenakedLady Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Mar-28-07 07:46 AM
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1. Good morning, RL!
:hi: :hug:

I liked the imagery in this one. Someday I'd love to visit SF.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Mar-28-07 07:48 AM
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2. It's a beautiful city
spent a long week there once and did not want to leave. ever.

:hi:

RL
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Mar-28-07 09:44 AM
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3. very nice!! and i especially like these lines:
Out of the past a fragile element
Of substance into accident.

posted in honor of san francisco:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o66f0lQOoBI
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Mar-28-07 12:03 PM
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4. My dear Retro!
I see the City I love in glimpses here......

Especially in these lines:

Think you, hungry is the city in the fog
Where now the darkened piles resume
Their framed and frozen prayer
Articulate and shafted in the stone
Against the void and absolute air.


Very mysterious and beautiful, just like San Francisco......

Thank you........:hug:


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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Mar-28-07 03:14 PM
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5. "Very mysterious and beautiful, just like San Francisco"
Agreed!

:hug:

RL
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