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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-30-06 06:24 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Mon 10/30/06)
The Trouble with Hammers

The trouble with owning hammers
is that you have to store them somewhere,
on pegs or at least in a drawer
or inside an emptied out tackle box,
long after the house is built
and the circus folded like an envelope
on the backs of unfamiliar trucks,
all night from Maine to Hollywood.
I want to go by three names like
child actors from the eighties.
My father kept hammers in a drawer
and once, when he stopped by
but I was out, he nailed a two-by-four
he stole from a construction site
under the sagging cushions of my couch.
I keep my hammers in the closet
but he found them anyway. I would
like to be a hammer, I think,
and swing all day down on the heads
of thin, unsuspecting nails
even though I am not particularly
violent or unmedicated, if that matters.
Its true, I was never any good
at math ever since that one bronze
star in fifth grade, and I know
youre not supposed to begin a speech
or say in a poem how nervous
you are, but I think there are more nails
than people, and more hammers
than people, and I am weary of these
constant reminders that nothing
built after the pyramids
seems able to hold together for long
not just relationships, but other things
like bookshelves, governments,
the new consensus on circumcision.
They say Mans first tool was a hammer,
which makes sense since I cant
imagine apes working a protractor,
much like a sextant under the wet stars.
But each time I swing, I can feel
my own head loosen from its shaft
of lacquered bone, and I know
once it flies, it will never be tight again.

Michael Meyerhofer

*******************

RL

If you have a request for a certain Poet, post their name in the thread and I will find a poem by them and post it...

if you want to see some of my poetry, see the blog at:
http://www.myspace.com/retropaul
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-30-06 11:42 AM
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1. ...
nothing/built after the pyramids/seems able to hold together for long

:hi:
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-30-06 12:29 PM
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2. now I understand why my head is not screwed on so tight
I think it has something to do with all that swinging
I did as a child
not to mention all the flying
I did as a curious teen

for lacquered bone
I am grateful


:hi:
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swimboy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-30-06 01:38 PM
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3. Excellent guy poem
I tried to keep my head on tight after it loosened up. And sometimes it would stay for a while, but never for long.

Now I just stay loose.

I hope he gets to go by three names some of the time.

Thanks, excellent guy! :hug:
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